Quicknotice 4
Last call before the removal of unused characters. Anyone wants to take up any of the following?
- Abeo Roux
- Exitium Morsque
- Rufeus
Last call before the removal of long-unwritten characters. Anyone wants to take up any of the following?
- Gordon
- Mala Das
- Psyche Wilson
(Adan Garcia, Ascronos Hell and Mer-Unta are already in use by active writers.)
Deadline for this would be one month from now. Write a chapter to claim your character.
[December 15, 2008]
Chapter 1:: Hell Flames

"Little poppies, little hell flames,
Do you do no harm?
You flicker. I cannot touch you.
I put my hands among the flames. Nothing burns"
- Sylvia Plath - Poppies In July
Red petals, flickering, burning, fell slowly from the sky. Ascronos stood in the great garden of his dreams, shrouded in a cloud of falling petals. They kissed and caressed his hair, settling upon his head, they skimmed silky smooth along the length of his drawn steel. There was no snow here, thought Ascoronos, no cold draghts to bite though your armour, to freeze your bones, to turn the childrens' faces to ice. Back home in Asgaroth, the snow fell thick and fast, all year round with no rebate, no mercy and with the fury of an angered god. Here it snowed fire. Red flames on burning petals, consuming, charring and turning them to ashes. Fumes spread across the garden, vapours that shrouded the earth, wreathed tendrils of smoke around his armoured feet. They did not touch him, they skirted along the bare steel that shod his feet. A broken breeze blew through his hair, his long silver-grey locks drifting gently, shimmering in the light of a full moon that shone through the canopy of dark trees in which he stood embowered. It was a place of savage beauty, haunted by ghosts of Ascronos' mind, shaped by hopes, dreams and fears only he could know or understand. Sheltered as he was in the dark garden where the thin grey trees hid him from view, he could not help but think about the past.
They had him in chains in Zarabusa. Locked and hidden deep in a valley. Within the prison of Din-a-Zar, a place so dreary that life within it passed in an endless blur of bleakness. They smashed his citadel, burnt his books, stole his secrets and all the knowledge he had acquired after years of sheltered study. Then they bound him in chains and threw him into the darkest corner of Din-a-Zar. To what good? Thought Ascronos, there in that garden as the petals turned from red to withered black. They would not use it, they could not. They would not understand. Dark Magic they called it, the ignorant fools. Men, they hate what they fear, they fear what they cannot understand. He had the secrets of life within his grasp. He stood on the brink of a discovery. A revelation that would change the world and those who lived in it, whether they liked it or not.
But one bitterly cold night as the candles in his study guttered down to dregs and the yellow light spilled shakily upon his ancient books of lore, they came for him. From his window he could see them down below, pools of lights spilling from where they stood huddled, holding up flaming brands and shouting for his blood. Their breath formed in clouds of white but their voices were loud and angry.
The plague, they said, was his doing. Black Magic that emenated from his tower, controlled by him. Puny fools, he had thought. What cared he for their mortal trappings, their day to day goings and comings, their homely woes and joys, when immortality itself beckoned to him from the shadows of his study, fumed and spread its delicious odour as he wore the hours away, bent over his jars of bubbling potions. But at last, just as he glimpsed the distant light, just as it all began to fall into place, they came for him. The cursed plague had done him in. The same plague that mutilated his servants and left him the sole inhabitant of his castle. He remembered their sickly faces, as they came to him, begging for leave to go home to their families. Sire, my children are dying, the one with the festering face has begged. Disgusted, he had turned them all out. Ascronos Hell does not deal with the pestilent miseries of the crass. Rats, of course it was the rats. He had known it all along. He had long ago taken such precautions with himself so as not to be bothered by the diseases of village whores. 'Magics', as the ignorant calld it, potions he had brewed for himself, which he could not nor would not be bothered to produce for the masses. He had come so far down the path of his secret studies that some of these cures could have effect only on himself, because he was not like the others. When the villagers had found him years ago, an infant bundled in silver cloth, with a burning star branded upon his forehead, they had known he would not be like the others. But now, those 'others' stood with firebrands at his doorstep, and he could do nothing.

He could do nothing. It was a thought that drove him mad, in his days of imprisonment. When he escaped, it was not a question of course, he would make sure they could never touch him again. He would rise, great and powerful beyond the scope or thought of the little. He would draw to himself, like minds from all the lands. Those of remarkable vision and intellect, those fit to rule and conquor, even protect the miserable masses they reigned over. He would have an army. An army such as the realms had never seen. So that he never had to run again, never flee in haste from his own domain, sought after by those who could never understand the gleaming truths within it. But there, that night, the wind rapping the verse of his doom, etching patterns of cold demise in lines of ice upon his window pane, while the rabble smote their crude contructs of war upon his shivering castle doors, fleeing was all the choice he had left. Escape was the only possibility. But as he fled down the passages of his citadel, they cornered him. They smashed the wooden doors and flooded in from all sides, their shouts bounding off the walls as they trapped him and clapped him in chains. Then came the long and hard journey to Din-a-Zar. They put him in a cage. A cage, like a wild animal. Him, Ascronos Hell, the greatest mind in all the realms trapped like a beast in a snare, helpless. They threw him in the dungeons, if so they could be called. Cold and dingy spaces closed in by icy stone, where the few beams of sunlight that filtered through seemed to die, to wither like the petals that fell all around him, to fade to grey before they touched his lined and dusty face. Most died of cold there, the others went insane. Ascronos lived. Lived, fought and dreamed within this icy tomb. For he knew that one day the shackles would break and he would rise, greater than before. And the world would know the anger of Ascronos Hell.
Ascronos arose from a dream within his dream, into the forest where he took shelter when his mind lost hope, there in his icy cell. Still, the pathetic petals of red burned and withered around him, as would the fools who confined him. The ones who had him in chains, the ones who burnt his books, his life, his home. All but his dreams. His dreams still shone dimly around him, ensnared as they were by tendrils of doubt, much as this forest was shrouded in half formed mist. A great tide of anger rose within Ascronos as he thought of the woe they had worked upon him and the vengeance that he would wreak, merciless and cruel when he broke through the fetters of this mortal prison. He held up his sword in the moonlight. A withered petal petal, once red, now burnt to cinders, drifted down, settled upon its edge and turned at once to blood. A drop of fresh dark blood gleamed upon his sword. It slid down the length of the sword and dripped down to the shrouded misty earth below. All at once, every petal in the air, every burnt or burning sheaf of red that twirled in the air around him turned to blood. It rained blood upon the bare head of Ascronos Hell, drenching him, soaking him and satiating the burning hatred within him, quenching the carnal craving for retribution that had buried itself in his breast like an arrown and had seeped its acid into his veins. The trees around him began to shake in a hideous agony. They writhed like trapped beasts that saw their death rushing at them but could do nothing. They split and exploded into a thousand splinters of wood, burning as they did so, scattering Hell's fury into the world of his dream. The mist that had calmly wrapped its fingers around his feet swirled in mad wrath, as if stirred by an angered demon. The demon was within him, him that stood calm in the midst of chaos, his anger burning, scarring, destroying the outer world. It shone through his frenzied eyes, it fed the flames that consumed the forest, it turned the petals to blood.
At last it was all over. The remnants of the once calm forest shivered in the aftermath of their creator's fury. The drops of blood dripped off the ends of Ascronos Hell's hair. They trickled down the edge of his blade. This dream-world that kept him sane would vanish and he would rise again, greater than before. And the world would know the anger of Ascronos Hell.
"And the prophets spoke of rain. And the coming of Him that would let blood, so that the rain fell red and painted the faces of the children. Woe be to the Fathers of the Hatred for the flames of Hell would burn them."
- From the Chronicles of Azanthian Gespo, Historian and Third King of the Realm, 1490 -
Images: First image: 'Blood Rain' by Jorge Malgora, MOCA Digital Art Contest 2004 entry. Second image: 'The Hermit' painted by Barrington Colby for the inside sleeve of Led Zeppelin's fourth album.
Abeo Roux
Name: Abeo Roux
Sex: Female
Species: Human
Age: 24
Physical Description: Has blossomed into a lean, confident and supremely stylish young woman, with wavy red hair and sharp brown eyes.
Strengths/Weaknesses: Everything about Abeo is double-edged. Her strengths become her weaknesses and vice versa. There's something deeper about her, more sinister, more intense, than what is seen at first glance. Her Twin is inside her own self, and is rarely ever visible to someone who hasn't known/observed her for a long time, unless of course, the situation demands it.
Adan Garcia
Sex: Male
Species: Unknown
Age: Looks about 38. But his real age is lost, even to himself.
Physical Description: Not too tall, not too short, but capable of appearing either. Brown hair highlighted by gold because of unending hours in the sun (which is weird, because, he wears a cowboy hat). He is stocky to look at, but is actually constructed out of pure muscle. Always dressed like an outlaw: trench coat, dusty boots, weird belt etc. But he also carries a black felt bag, very ancient and dusty and looks almost empty, slung to his sides.
Has a very easygoing smile above a square thread-barely goateed chin - capable of being both charming and sinister, but mostly the former. That’s until you look into his eyes, generally in the shadows of his hat, which cannot be mistaken for anything other than evil and dangerous. Gives off strange energy waves.
Weaknesses/ Strengths: Capable of fighting both with his brawns and brains, but prefers to fight with brawn, because brain's the last resort (he thinks of it as an act of charity to his adversaries). Has high manoeuvering skills and can appear to be at particular places and disappear from it at a random instance. Oh, he is also a time traveller (and doesn’t need flashy gadgets to do it, he just flicks a button in a dark little corner of his brains). Doesn’t talk much. Mostly observes from the shadows of street corners and backrooms.
Only weakness that he himself knows about is body odour. Carries a deodorant everywhere, which he never uses. The rest he prefers to keep secret at present because, he feels, it’ll ruin his style.
Al'skandar Phillips
Name: Al’skandar Phillips.
Sex: Male.
Species: He’s not very sure. Looks mostly human.
Age: Late teens.
Physical Description: Average height. Pale. Square jaw, aquiline nose, thin mouth. Longish hair, brown at the moment, used to have silver threading through it. One wouldn’t notice Al’skandar in a room with ten people in it, till he looks up. His eyes are silver… completely. Which explains his clothing choice of caps and hooded jackets. Shades help, but not indoors. The jeans and shirts he wears are ordinary, if rather faded. Also wears a leather wristband, which is broad enough to hide an intricate silver tattoo.
Strengths: The kid at the back of the class who seems to be sleeping but can quote his/her words back at the teacher, complete with mistakes. Well, figuratively, because Al’skandar was home-schooled. He’s easily ignored. And he can finish off people’s sentences… literally. Of course, he usually does it in the relative privacy of his mind. Wouldn’t want anyone to think him a freak or anything.
Weaknesses: Physical Strength. Well, the lack thereof. Al’skandar can throw a punch, but he’d much prefer not to. His usual MO is to run away when the other person/people think(s) about hitting him. Or just ducking, which course of action does not end well for his assailant(s). He also tends to arrogance. However, he’s a bit tensed right now about the prospect of starting college.
Ascronos Hell
Sex: Male
Species: Apparently human
Age: Undisclosed, but at least middle-aged
Physical Description: Very tall and sinewy. Long silver hair and haggard careworn face of a sorcerer obsessed with secret studies. Large eyes with great dark pupils, described as frightening and haunting by those who meet him. Long thin nose, slightly bent and crooked. Long scar on face, running in a vertical line above and below eyes, caused by experiment gone wrong. Fingers long and artistic, capable of great strength. Star-shaped mark upon a broad forehead, and strange runic symbols of unknown origin and meaning carved upon torso. Prefers simple clothing, black cloaks and fitting garments. Sometimes hooded, face in shadows. When in armour, menacing and imposing. Iron body armour with some ornamentation, also carries a massive rune-etched sword.
Strengths: Great intellect, scientific and necromantic curiousity, patience and belief in own abilities. Determination. A fair amount of physical strength. More to be found out.
Weaknesses: Overt self-reliance, hatred for the ordinary, cruelty.
Cybele
Sex: Female.
Species: One of the Other Worldlies. Shall be talked about later.
Age: Does not really matter, does it, as long as she looks 24.
Physical Description: Black-haired, brown-eyed, she is visible in your average penthouse dreams. She possesses a vivid smile and a body to die for. Literally.
Strengths: Blood Sugar Sex Magic.
Weaknesses: Men.
Marital Status: Single (How, one may ask. Its just that no one's been able to keep up with her. Yet.)
Likes: Chocolates and Tarot Cards.
Dislikes: Bad breath.
Occupation: Currently engaged in seducing a high priest of the RHEUMATIC ORDER.
Exitium Morsque
Sex: Apparently male
Species: Apparently human
Age: Late 40s-early 50s.
Physical Features: About 6 feet tall and very thin. Has bluish grey eyes and long, greying hair. Slight hunchback. Slight limp in the left leg. Wears an old army greatcoat and baggy trousers. Sports a small tattoo of a snake, on the back of his right hand.
Strengths: Can move very fast in spite of limp. Very good with the kobudÅ set of weapons. Carries a walking stick with him. Very piercing stare. Persuasive. Has an extensive knowledge of technology. Has a sense of humour. Seems to be able to take higher amount of damage than normal.
Weakness: Frequently disappears. Cannot be relied upon much. Has a tendency to believe the best of people. Still believes in values like honesty and patriotism (this could also be a strength). Has a tendency to play the devil's advocate.
Gordon
Sex: Male
Species: Apparently human
Age: Unknown
Physical Description: Dirty ragged clothes, bony limbs, dirty claw-like nails. Head is hooded most of the time so face cannot be distinguished clearly. Long dirty brown hair, bearded, piercing and disturbing gaze. Has a box all the time - a blackish brown wooden box with a heavy lid and metal knobs, and strange engravings on the surface, dirty and dented. He stays in this box at some street-corner nearby a railway station, apparently a street sleeper.
Himalaya alias Him
Sex: Female
Species: Apparently human
Age: Apparently 10-and-a-half
Physical Description: Smallish, coffee coloured, snub-nosed, brown-eyed. Unnoticeable and nondescript for most of the time. Crooked teeth giving way to a crooked smile that is both very rare and startlingly lovely. Sleek black hair, usually pulled into a ponytail. Grubby knees, faded clothes. Prefers being shoeless. Has had a tiny nosepin since birth, muted gold. It won’t come off. No dramatic scars, to her disappointment, just scabs.
Strengths: Non-prejudiced. Is a kid. Can keep quiet when required, can blend into the background if necessary. Self-reliant to an extent, therefore resourceful. Has an imagination that leans towards depravity.
Weaknesses: Same as above. Also a little nosy. If it had been a strength it would have been called inquisitiveness, but the plain truth is that she's nosy. In a covert way, of course.
Mala Das
Sex: Female
Species: Apparently human
Age: Around 27-29 years (she gets all flustered when asked)
Physical Description: Everbody knows a Mala Das (pronounced Daash), with different names perhaps. She is around 5’2”, neither fat nor thin, neither tall nor short, neither dark nor fair. Has medium-length black hair, usually well-oiled and braided. Oval nondescript face with a small pretty nose, calm peaceful rather large black eyes and a soft, slightly petulant mouth. All her features are rather ‘beautiful’ when considered separately, but when they come together in her face, no striking beauty is created. Her face is perhaps not plain, but neither beautiful - rather ordinary.
Strengths: Soft-spoken, reserved and shy. Has great persuasive power. Generally described with the vague “She’s nice.”
Weakness: The tendency to be inconspicuous, almost invisible. And not even remotely exciting.
Marital status: Unmarried. Reason 1. Does not want to leave old mother. 2. Never really liked somebody in that way (unless you consider Shah Rukh Khan, of course). Nevertheless, her mother is still on the lookout for respectable marriage ads.
Occupation: Receptionist at an average office (not a very well-known one perhaps, but "very respectable").
Quirks: The only thing not ordinary in her is her almost compulsive obsession with horror novels. They tend to make her laugh.
Marco Zabrinski
Sex: Male
Species: Human
Age: 23
Physical Description: Average height, slight tan, medium-length hair, slightly bony cheeks with a stubble which he never gets rid of. Clothing differs from time to time but normally a pair of jeans and a T-Shirt with a leather jacket over it. Has a tattoo of a dagger on his left arm and it peeks out of his sleeve.
Strengths: Mental toughness unmatched
Weaknesses: His past
Occupation: Climbing the stairs of success in the drug trafficking industry
Born in: Masovia, Poland
Stays at: Rome
Mark Middleton
Sex: Male
Species: Apparently human
Age: Apparently, late 30s.
Physical Features: Light built, medium height, casually dressed, does not stand out from a distance. Walks slowly, talks in a low voice, but the discerning eye will notice a casual grace to his movement of the kind imparted by restraint of a greater agility. Angular face, framed by flowing black hair streaked with a few grey strands. Prominent eyebrows, deep, calm, almost weary eyes. Nose would've been small and sharp if it didn't look like its left side had been smashed by a heavy blow. Overlooking that flaw, there is a mildly melancholy, worn-out charmingness about him. Only when he grins - which he does not do often - the person being grinned at realizes that the man looking at them is different, quite different from what they had taken him to be.
Strengths: Presence of mind. Learns/understands/reacts appropriately before others around him even realize he's working things out.
Weaknesses: Does not know who he is or why he is here. No friends, weapons or any other visible advantage. No apparent goal/ambition/purpose. Curious and easily tempted, but he's struggling to control that. Is likely to discover more of his strengths and weaknesses as he goes by.
Mer-Unta
Sex: Female
Species: Mermaid
Age: 7 in Mer-years (21 in Human years)
Physical Description: Black wavy hair with brown highlights, waist length. Clear skin, slim figure, height 5 ft. Lower body is that of a fish, each scale a shiny bluish-green colour. Has startlingly green eyes, that seem to probe into the depths of your mind when she's looking at you. Wears a long chain of sea-shells strung together. Speaks a rare dialect of the Mer-people, called Mer-drinab, though she can also speak English. Walks on her hands when she is on the ground.
Weaknesses: Loses strength if she is not wearing her sea-shell necklace.
Strengths: Has fantastic strength in the lower 'fish' part of her body, one lash from it can make a dent in cement. Strong swimmer, can cover great distances in a few minutes or so. Mer-Unta can also change the colour of her eyes according to her mood.
Moses Putatunda
Sex: Male
Species: Human
Age: 22
Physical description: Average Joe looks. But looks kind of cute with ruffled hair. Piercing eyes. Worn out mountain shoes, likes to wear t-shirts with logos of his favorite bands. Unwashed jeans, worn out by heavy use, not by the brand manufacturer. The usual unkempt backpacker look.
Strengths: Above average intelligence, excellent intuition and perceptiveness, superior observation skills (sometimes over-rated) , very persuasive when needed. Can also cause bizarre and disastrous random events and affect random people randomly anywhere in the world with electromagnetic brain impulses. But he doesn't know it.
Weaknesses: Indecisive, sometimes impatient and given to fits of rage, weighs 48 kgs. Others will be unveiled progressively.
Psyche Wilson
Sex: Female
Species: Homo sapien
Age: 23
Physical Description: Tall. Dark, slightly curly hair (below shoulder length). Coffee-coloured eyes. Broad frame. Slight tan. Wears black-rimmed, rectangular spectacles. Wears a mood ring on the middle finger of the left hand. Smart sense of dressing, although not too adventurous. Not unattractive.
Strengths: Sharp, courageous, calm, stoical, generous, loves children. More to be disclosed as story progresses.
Weaknesses: Short attention span, proud, unforgiving, slightly conservative or old-fashioned (however you may want to put it). More to be revealed. Also, has vertigo.
Marital Status: Unmarried
Likes: All the books her grandmother left her, children, dogs, pink carnations, alcohol.
Dislikes: Her father, her current job, cats.
Occupation: Does free-lance work for local newsapapers. Looking for another job.
Born in (place): Athens, Greece.
Stays at: Istanbul, Turkey.
Rufeus
Sex: Male
Species: Vampire
Age: 17-and-a-half
Physical Description: Medium height, thin, slightly hunched. Pale skinned, an almost triangular face, deep black hair. Bloodshot, intense eyes; a short, crooked nose, bat-like ears, a tapering chin and sharp, pointed teeth. Tiny, thin scratch below the right eye which always seems fresh. Long, slender fingers, like a pianist, with fingernails which look weathered, slightly yellowed. Speaks slowly and with an undertone of hostility, due to his embittered views about his existence, identity and spite for things in general. Dressed in a shabby, medieval black overcoat with specks of dry blood in the middle, a black, torn trouser.
Strengths: Extremely determined, has strong views about things,v alues his judgment which is more humanely relevant than riddled with savage desires. Possesses considerable strength and can turn extremely ruthless when he faces his enemies, especially if he's emotionally provoked. Has exceptionally controlled thirst for blood, which arises from immeasurable spite for his family and his identity.
Weaknesses: His disregard, contempt for his identity, his unwillingness to appreciate himself for who he really is which results in a rising discontent, an emotional imbalance within.
Saibalini Sen
Sex: Female
Species: Human
Age: 64
Physical Description: Tall and angular, white hair pulled back in a bun, usually clad in crisp white sarees and shawls to match.
Strengths: Agility and a voice that commands attention.
Weakness: High blood pressure.
Zephyrus alias Henry White
Sex: Male
Species: Half-god
Age: Ageless
Physical Description: Long shiny raven black hair. A slim built. He is characterised by his flowing black robe and scars on his forearms. Looks like he is in his 20's (a major advantage when it comes to flirting). Mismatched blue and hazel eyes.
Strengths: Ageless good looks. Ruthless and cold. His heart has stopped beating long ago. Does not possess physical strengths as such but his "almost-immortality" protects him from being killed in the hands of any human.
Weaknesses: Overconfidence.
Quicknotice 3
It's already been way longer than the deadline, so here's the second wave of dropping authors. (The first wave included authors who had registered but never posted.)
This wave, will drop authors who had posted characters but never wrote a chapter. The characters remain, and will be free to be picked up by any active author who wants them.
(The third wave of dropping will be for authors who have written one chapter and haven't returned to carry ahead the story. Therefore, be warned and prepared.)
[Late September, 2008]
Quicknotice 2
The characters gone pouf from the posts, yes. And no, nothing's been deleted. All the details have been sent to the sidebar, where they will stay for now on... since as the story progresses our characters' reactions to each other should not, ideally, be designed by our personal equations in life. All we need to know is who is who. I haven't deleted any of your character posts either. They've been sent to the drafts and can be retrieved, if you want to.And there are more than five characters now, so we jump into the story. Newcomers, however, please feel free to introduce yours characters. Make them a post (see the first post for further instructions). They'll arrive at the sidebar (and the drafts) in due course of time.
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