Terriblog
Quicknotice 4
- Abeo Roux
- Exitium Morsque
- Rufeus
Last call before the removal of long-unwritten characters. Anyone wants to take up any of the following?
- Gordon
- Mala Das
- Psyche Wilson
(Adan Garcia, Ascronos Hell and Mer-Unta are already in use by active writers.)
Deadline for this would be one month from now. Write a chapter to claim your character.
[December 15, 2008]
Monday, May 19, 2008
Chapter 40:: The Loose End
He was sure word had already spread about Blanc’s murder. It wasn’t very long before they would trace it back to him. Till now, no one knew about Blanc’s indirect involvement in Gerd’s murder, which Marco was forced to carry out. Blanc liked to keep his brainwaves to himself - not many of his men knew about his deal with Gerd. And Gerd was a man known to be under Francesco’s wing, so his disappearance had pointed the attention towards him rather than Marco. But word never took long to spread and little details would soon begin to spill out to the other side as well. They had had valuable business from Blanc and were they to trace the murder back to Marco, and then he would have two adversaries to watch out for.
At this point, only Eva knew of Marco’s connection with Gerd and funnily enough, her own relation with Gerd had never come out. Gerd had wanted to protect her from the dirt of his business and never talked about any family he had. Marco had found out by chance that Gerd had a sister and that’s how he had come to know Eva. After Gerd's death, Marco was forced to take Eva into the business. He suspected Blanc had found out about her and may come after her assuming Eva now owned the money he had given Gerd. Eva surprisingly proved to be a useful addition - she was smart and tough, and started watching over the drugs in the basement of the nightclub supposedly owned by Francesco. It was Eva’s idea to completely clear the club of any Francesco connection. She staged a buyout of the club from Francesco, employed new staff and changed the setup to make it look like she was an independent owner. It put the place out of the picture as far as a hideout for the drugs was concerned. Neither the Polizia nor their rivals had managed to break in there simply because all connection had been cut off between her and Francesco.
Even though being in the business had made Eva understand why Gerd had had to be killed, she never quite forgave the man who had actually shoved the bullets into her brother. She thought she worked for Francesco, so her loyalty lay with only him; and if chance arose, she may consider giving Marco away. Right now, she was the only loose end of his watertight plan. That brought Marco back to the nightclub - to try and make sure she was completely on his side.
He didn't know, of course, that he had already been followed for a couple of days by an American cop posing as a journalist. He had no idea, when he got out of his car and walked into the club, that there were microphones placed at strategic points by a certain someone... and their controls were back in Wilson’s car, who could even now hear every word that he said.
‘Eva, they’re looking for Blanc's killer. They don’t know who did it, but they will if you don’t stay clear.’
‘What makes you think I’m gonna listen to you?’
‘This is no time for games; it’s serious. I know you can’t forgive me proper for that day but like I said, I had no choice. Now I’ve done what I promised and you need to support me here.’
Wilson sat listening to every word. The more she heard the clearer the picture began to get.
‘You want a favour from me. Marco Zabrinski, the right-hand man of Francesco, wants a favour from one of his minor gang members.’
‘If you want to hear it that way, then yes. I need your help here and I hope you will help me out.’
‘Why do you think that is? I’d told you I wouldn’t forget it. How’d you think now all of a sudden I am going to?’
‘Cuz I finished the man who was the reason.’
‘Don’t bullshit me... you and all your... I have to talk. He wasn’t the reason, YOU were.’
‘You are part of the business now. You very well know why I had to do it. I didn’t have any choice.’
‘Yeah well, maybe I have no choice here.’
‘This is bullshit, Eva! I need to have you on my side right now.’
A long pause made Wilson think her connection had gone faulty and she was missing the conversation. But several minutes later, she heard Eva say a disgruntled ‘Okay.'
‘Good. I’ll be going now.’
Wilson heard the sound of footsteps fade away and thought it was Zabrinski walking out of the room and away from the range of the microphone. But then the footsteps could be heard coming back. She heard Zabrinski speak again, ‘On second thoughts, Eva…’ and then the connection snapped off.
The sudden disconnection didn’t make sense to Wilson. The only possible option could have been that the bug had been found and snapped off. She didn’t know what she could do from her current position, so she remained in her car keeping watch at the door, in case Zabrinski walked out. He didn’t come out, but many others came out and drove away. She noticed one particular lady wearing a stunning red dress over an inch-perfect figure walk out of the club and drive right past her. She waited for Zabrinski to show up. He definitely had to be still inside since his car was still parked outside. But there was no sign of him.
Late at night a flock of people started coming out of the club. Wilson was sure Zabrinski would be one of men in the crowd. He had probably waited for the crowd to leave, to avoid being spotted easily. But there wasn’t a sign of him among the people who now came out of the club. People got into their cars and went away, but Zabrinski’s car remained untouched. Obviously he was still inside.
The club closed after a while. Wilson guessed Eva and Marco were still inside for some reason. She waited hours on an end, but there was no sign of him. He might have left through the back door, but his car, still left in the parking lot, kept her doubts alive.
Eventually, Wilson gave up for the night (which was already beginning to fade into daylight) and went back to the place Enzo had fixed up for her. She spent the next few days trying to re-track Zabrinski, quite in vain. But a piece of information brought in by Enzo a couple days later turned her head. Eva, the owner of the club, had gone missing and her men were looking all over for her. She had driven out of the club on the day Wilson had been tailing Zabrinski and no one had heard from her since.
Enzo had managed to procure a photograph of Eva for Wilson and when she saw it, she got even more frustrated. Eva was the very woman in the red dress she had seen coming out of the club and who had driven right past her. It was an impossible-to-ignore coincidence that the very same day Zabrinski had disappeared from her radar, so should the person he had been talking to at the club. Wilson tried to mentally work out what might have happened after her connection snapped. It was very mysterious how it had come off in the first place. She sent Enzo back to keep an ear out for anything about Zabrinski and see if he could get any word about Eva as well.
The Game
Abeo Roux
Sex: Female
Species: Human
Age: 24
Physical Description: Has blossomed into a lean, confident and supremely stylish young woman, with wavy red hair and sharp brown eyes.
Strengths/Weaknesses: Everything about Abeo is double-edged. Her strengths become her weaknesses and vice versa. There's something deeper about her, more sinister, more intense, than what is seen at first glance. Her Twin is inside her own self, and is rarely ever visible to someone who hasn't known/observed her for a long time, unless of course, the situation demands it.
Adan Garcia
Sex: Male
Species: Unknown
Age: Looks about 38. But his real age is lost, even to himself.
Physical Description: Not too tall, not too short, but capable of appearing either. Brown hair highlighted by gold because of unending hours in the sun (which is weird, because, he wears a cowboy hat). He is stocky to look at, but is actually constructed out of pure muscle. Always dressed like an outlaw: trench coat, dusty boots, weird belt etc. But he also carries a black felt bag, very ancient and dusty and looks almost empty, slung to his sides.
Has a very easygoing smile above a square thread-barely goateed chin - capable of being both charming and sinister, but mostly the former. That’s until you look into his eyes, generally in the shadows of his hat, which cannot be mistaken for anything other than evil and dangerous. Gives off strange energy waves.
Weaknesses/ Strengths: Capable of fighting both with his brawns and brains, but prefers to fight with brawn, because brain's the last resort (he thinks of it as an act of charity to his adversaries). Has high manoeuvering skills and can appear to be at particular places and disappear from it at a random instance. Oh, he is also a time traveller (and doesn’t need flashy gadgets to do it, he just flicks a button in a dark little corner of his brains). Doesn’t talk much. Mostly observes from the shadows of street corners and backrooms.
Only weakness that he himself knows about is body odour. Carries a deodorant everywhere, which he never uses. The rest he prefers to keep secret at present because, he feels, it’ll ruin his style.
Al'skandar Phillips
Sex: Male.
Species: He’s not very sure. Looks mostly human.
Age: Late teens.
Physical Description: Average height. Pale. Square jaw, aquiline nose, thin mouth. Longish hair, brown at the moment, used to have silver threading through it. One wouldn’t notice Al’skandar in a room with ten people in it, till he looks up. His eyes are silver… completely. Which explains his clothing choice of caps and hooded jackets. Shades help, but not indoors. The jeans and shirts he wears are ordinary, if rather faded. Also wears a leather wristband, which is broad enough to hide an intricate silver tattoo.
Strengths: The kid at the back of the class who seems to be sleeping but can quote his/her words back at the teacher, complete with mistakes. Well, figuratively, because Al’skandar was home-schooled. He’s easily ignored. And he can finish off people’s sentences… literally. Of course, he usually does it in the relative privacy of his mind. Wouldn’t want anyone to think him a freak or anything.
Weaknesses: Physical Strength. Well, the lack thereof. Al’skandar can throw a punch, but he’d much prefer not to. His usual MO is to run away when the other person/people think(s) about hitting him. Or just ducking, which course of action does not end well for his assailant(s). He also tends to arrogance. However, he’s a bit tensed right now about the prospect of starting college.
Ascronos Hell
Species: Apparently human
Age: Undisclosed, but at least middle-aged
Physical Description: Very tall and sinewy. Long silver hair and haggard careworn face of a sorcerer obsessed with secret studies. Large eyes with great dark pupils, described as frightening and haunting by those who meet him. Long thin nose, slightly bent and crooked. Long scar on face, running in a vertical line above and below eyes, caused by experiment gone wrong. Fingers long and artistic, capable of great strength. Star-shaped mark upon a broad forehead, and strange runic symbols of unknown origin and meaning carved upon torso. Prefers simple clothing, black cloaks and fitting garments. Sometimes hooded, face in shadows. When in armour, menacing and imposing. Iron body armour with some ornamentation, also carries a massive rune-etched sword.
Strengths: Great intellect, scientific and necromantic curiousity, patience and belief in own abilities. Determination. A fair amount of physical strength. More to be found out.
Weaknesses: Overt self-reliance, hatred for the ordinary, cruelty.
Cybele
Species: One of the Other Worldlies. Shall be talked about later.
Age: Does not really matter, does it, as long as she looks 24.
Physical Description: Black-haired, brown-eyed, she is visible in your average penthouse dreams. She possesses a vivid smile and a body to die for. Literally.
Strengths: Blood Sugar Sex Magic.
Weaknesses: Men.
Marital Status: Single (How, one may ask. Its just that no one's been able to keep up with her. Yet.)
Likes: Chocolates and Tarot Cards.
Dislikes: Bad breath.
Occupation: Currently engaged in seducing a high priest of the RHEUMATIC ORDER.
Exitium Morsque
Species: Apparently human
Age: Late 40s-early 50s.
Physical Features: About 6 feet tall and very thin. Has bluish grey eyes and long, greying hair. Slight hunchback. Slight limp in the left leg. Wears an old army greatcoat and baggy trousers. Sports a small tattoo of a snake, on the back of his right hand.
Strengths: Can move very fast in spite of limp. Very good with the kobudÅ set of weapons. Carries a walking stick with him. Very piercing stare. Persuasive. Has an extensive knowledge of technology. Has a sense of humour. Seems to be able to take higher amount of damage than normal.
Weakness: Frequently disappears. Cannot be relied upon much. Has a tendency to believe the best of people. Still believes in values like honesty and patriotism (this could also be a strength). Has a tendency to play the devil's advocate.
Gordon
Species: Apparently human
Age: Unknown
Physical Description: Dirty ragged clothes, bony limbs, dirty claw-like nails. Head is hooded most of the time so face cannot be distinguished clearly. Long dirty brown hair, bearded, piercing and disturbing gaze. Has a box all the time - a blackish brown wooden box with a heavy lid and metal knobs, and strange engravings on the surface, dirty and dented. He stays in this box at some street-corner nearby a railway station, apparently a street sleeper.
Himalaya alias Him
Species: Apparently human
Age: Apparently 10-and-a-half
Physical Description: Smallish, coffee coloured, snub-nosed, brown-eyed. Unnoticeable and nondescript for most of the time. Crooked teeth giving way to a crooked smile that is both very rare and startlingly lovely. Sleek black hair, usually pulled into a ponytail. Grubby knees, faded clothes. Prefers being shoeless. Has had a tiny nosepin since birth, muted gold. It won’t come off. No dramatic scars, to her disappointment, just scabs.
Strengths: Non-prejudiced. Is a kid. Can keep quiet when required, can blend into the background if necessary. Self-reliant to an extent, therefore resourceful. Has an imagination that leans towards depravity.
Weaknesses: Same as above. Also a little nosy. If it had been a strength it would have been called inquisitiveness, but the plain truth is that she's nosy. In a covert way, of course.
Mala Das
Species: Apparently human
Age: Around 27-29 years (she gets all flustered when asked)
Physical Description: Everbody knows a Mala Das (pronounced Daash), with different names perhaps. She is around 5’2”, neither fat nor thin, neither tall nor short, neither dark nor fair. Has medium-length black hair, usually well-oiled and braided. Oval nondescript face with a small pretty nose, calm peaceful rather large black eyes and a soft, slightly petulant mouth. All her features are rather ‘beautiful’ when considered separately, but when they come together in her face, no striking beauty is created. Her face is perhaps not plain, but neither beautiful - rather ordinary.
Strengths: Soft-spoken, reserved and shy. Has great persuasive power. Generally described with the vague “She’s nice.”
Weakness: The tendency to be inconspicuous, almost invisible. And not even remotely exciting.
Marital status: Unmarried. Reason 1. Does not want to leave old mother. 2. Never really liked somebody in that way (unless you consider Shah Rukh Khan, of course). Nevertheless, her mother is still on the lookout for respectable marriage ads.
Occupation: Receptionist at an average office (not a very well-known one perhaps, but "very respectable").
Quirks: The only thing not ordinary in her is her almost compulsive obsession with horror novels. They tend to make her laugh.
Marco Zabrinski
Species: Human
Age: 23
Physical Description: Average height, slight tan, medium-length hair, slightly bony cheeks with a stubble which he never gets rid of. Clothing differs from time to time but normally a pair of jeans and a T-Shirt with a leather jacket over it. Has a tattoo of a dagger on his left arm and it peeks out of his sleeve.
Strengths: Mental toughness unmatched
Weaknesses: His past
Occupation: Climbing the stairs of success in the drug trafficking industry
Born in: Masovia, Poland
Stays at: Rome
Mark Middleton
Species: Apparently human
Age: Apparently, late 30s.
Physical Features: Light built, medium height, casually dressed, does not stand out from a distance. Walks slowly, talks in a low voice, but the discerning eye will notice a casual grace to his movement of the kind imparted by restraint of a greater agility. Angular face, framed by flowing black hair streaked with a few grey strands. Prominent eyebrows, deep, calm, almost weary eyes. Nose would've been small and sharp if it didn't look like its left side had been smashed by a heavy blow. Overlooking that flaw, there is a mildly melancholy, worn-out charmingness about him. Only when he grins - which he does not do often - the person being grinned at realizes that the man looking at them is different, quite different from what they had taken him to be.
Strengths: Presence of mind. Learns/understands/reacts appropriately before others around him even realize he's working things out.
Weaknesses: Does not know who he is or why he is here. No friends, weapons or any other visible advantage. No apparent goal/ambition/purpose. Curious and easily tempted, but he's struggling to control that. Is likely to discover more of his strengths and weaknesses as he goes by.
Mer-Unta
Species: Mermaid
Age: 7 in Mer-years (21 in Human years)
Physical Description: Black wavy hair with brown highlights, waist length. Clear skin, slim figure, height 5 ft. Lower body is that of a fish, each scale a shiny bluish-green colour. Has startlingly green eyes, that seem to probe into the depths of your mind when she's looking at you. Wears a long chain of sea-shells strung together. Speaks a rare dialect of the Mer-people, called Mer-drinab, though she can also speak English. Walks on her hands when she is on the ground.
Weaknesses: Loses strength if she is not wearing her sea-shell necklace.
Strengths: Has fantastic strength in the lower 'fish' part of her body, one lash from it can make a dent in cement. Strong swimmer, can cover great distances in a few minutes or so. Mer-Unta can also change the colour of her eyes according to her mood.
Moses Putatunda
Species: Human
Age: 22
Physical description: Average Joe looks. But looks kind of cute with ruffled hair. Piercing eyes. Worn out mountain shoes, likes to wear t-shirts with logos of his favorite bands. Unwashed jeans, worn out by heavy use, not by the brand manufacturer. The usual unkempt backpacker look.
Strengths: Above average intelligence, excellent intuition and perceptiveness, superior observation skills (sometimes over-rated) , very persuasive when needed. Can also cause bizarre and disastrous random events and affect random people randomly anywhere in the world with electromagnetic brain impulses. But he doesn't know it.
Weaknesses: Indecisive, sometimes impatient and given to fits of rage, weighs 48 kgs. Others will be unveiled progressively.
Psyche Wilson
Species: Homo sapien
Age: 23
Physical Description: Tall. Dark, slightly curly hair (below shoulder length). Coffee-coloured eyes. Broad frame. Slight tan. Wears black-rimmed, rectangular spectacles. Wears a mood ring on the middle finger of the left hand. Smart sense of dressing, although not too adventurous. Not unattractive.
Strengths: Sharp, courageous, calm, stoical, generous, loves children. More to be disclosed as story progresses.
Weaknesses: Short attention span, proud, unforgiving, slightly conservative or old-fashioned (however you may want to put it). More to be revealed. Also, has vertigo.
Marital Status: Unmarried
Likes: All the books her grandmother left her, children, dogs, pink carnations, alcohol.
Dislikes: Her father, her current job, cats.
Occupation: Does free-lance work for local newsapapers. Looking for another job.
Born in (place): Athens, Greece.
Stays at: Istanbul, Turkey.
Rufeus
Species: Vampire
Age: 17-and-a-half
Physical Description: Medium height, thin, slightly hunched. Pale skinned, an almost triangular face, deep black hair. Bloodshot, intense eyes; a short, crooked nose, bat-like ears, a tapering chin and sharp, pointed teeth. Tiny, thin scratch below the right eye which always seems fresh. Long, slender fingers, like a pianist, with fingernails which look weathered, slightly yellowed. Speaks slowly and with an undertone of hostility, due to his embittered views about his existence, identity and spite for things in general. Dressed in a shabby, medieval black overcoat with specks of dry blood in the middle, a black, torn trouser.
Strengths: Extremely determined, has strong views about things,v alues his judgment which is more humanely relevant than riddled with savage desires. Possesses considerable strength and can turn extremely ruthless when he faces his enemies, especially if he's emotionally provoked. Has exceptionally controlled thirst for blood, which arises from immeasurable spite for his family and his identity.
Weaknesses: His disregard, contempt for his identity, his unwillingness to appreciate himself for who he really is which results in a rising discontent, an emotional imbalance within.
Saibalini Sen
Species: Human
Age: 64
Physical Description: Tall and angular, white hair pulled back in a bun, usually clad in crisp white sarees and shawls to match.
Strengths: Agility and a voice that commands attention.
Weakness: High blood pressure.
Zephyrus alias Henry White
Species: Half-god
Age: Ageless
Physical Description: Long shiny raven black hair. A slim built. He is characterised by his flowing black robe and scars on his forearms. Looks like he is in his 20's (a major advantage when it comes to flirting). Mismatched blue and hazel eyes.
Strengths: Ageless good looks. Ruthless and cold. His heart has stopped beating long ago. Does not possess physical strengths as such but his "almost-immortality" protects him from being killed in the hands of any human.
Weaknesses: Overconfidence.
Quicknotice 3
This wave, will drop authors who had posted characters but never wrote a chapter. The characters remain, and will be free to be picked up by any active author who wants them.
(The third wave of dropping will be for authors who have written one chapter and haven't returned to carry ahead the story. Therefore, be warned and prepared.)
[Late September, 2008]
Quicknotice 2
I haven't deleted any of your character posts either. They've been sent to the drafts and can be retrieved, if you want to.
And there are more than five characters now, so we jump into the story. Newcomers, however, please feel free to introduce yours characters. Make them a post (see the first post for further instructions). They'll arrive at the sidebar (and the drafts) in due course of time.
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