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Quicknotice 4
- Abeo Roux
- Exitium Morsque
- Rufeus
Last call before the removal of long-unwritten characters. Anyone wants to take up any of the following?
- Gordon
- Mala Das
- Psyche Wilson
(Adan Garcia, Ascronos Hell and Mer-Unta are already in use by active writers.)
Deadline for this would be one month from now. Write a chapter to claim your character.
[December 15, 2008]
Sunday, February 24, 2008
Chapter 21:: The Warning
‘There are going to be serious consequences’, Marco remembered a voice telling him, ‘You sure to want to take him on?’
‘Posi – fuckin –tive. I’m sure’, Marco remembered saying.
‘Tanning those chest muscles hard boy?’, a voice came from the door of the shower, ‘it’s way better if you roll a tongue over it first. Want that?’
Marco appeared least bothered and continued to stare outside.
‘What’s wrong honey, got a dip now have you?’
‘Would it help to shut your mouth if I said yes?’, snapped back Marco.
The woman speaking to him glared back at him with filth and shook with anger, but controlled her temper and went and sat on the other side of the bed. She took off the towel she was wearing to reveal nothing but a black g-string she had on her. She took the red top squashed under the quilt and put it on, her hair was still wet from the shower but she didn’t bother drying it. She then reached out to the edge of the bed for a deep brown leather skirt and slid her legs into it. Her black stockings were rolled up next to the pillow, and she stuck her toes in them and rolled them up her glossy legs. Once she was done, she turned around towards the man who had been ignoring her right since the time she had opened her eyes after the night. She felt flabbergasted and equally surprised at the sudden change in behaviour. She felt it wasn’t worth trying to find out what she had done to annoy him, even though nobody else had ever changed this way the morning after.
‘Funny business I’m in you know. I get some who just want to talk and of course that’s because then cannot do a thing and then there’s you, who won’t talk at all.’
‘The money’s on the table.’
‘It’s not always about money, this isn’t a one night thing and you know it never has been.’
Marco had a lit up a cigarette by now, he began walking towards the couch from the bed after losing the sheets and putting on a pair of boxers. He sat down on it and laid back in a comfortable posture. He didn’t say anything to the last comment and it incensed the woman even more.
‘Answer me fucker, I am asking you a question.’
‘You know what they say?’
‘What?’
‘That you can’t answer when you haven’t been asked a proper question. D’yeh know what else they say?’
‘WHAT?’
‘That you don’t pay a whore to fuck you, you pay her to shut up and leave the next morning….there’s the money….on the table.’
With these words Marco went back to staring outside as heard the hurried movements of a pair of feet getting into leather boots and walking towards the door.
‘You forgot this.’, Marco said holding up a black bra over his head, without even bothering to look at her.
Her rage was beyond the extent of walking back and collecting it from him.
‘Shag in it mother fucker!’, she screamed before slamming the door shut behind her.
Marco threw it behind him somewhere in the room and took a few deep breaths and let them out slowly. He had been thinking about something for a long time, remembering it exactly as it had happened, before he had been disturbed by the little less than polite exchange. The voice kept echoing in his ears now, in fact there were two voices, one of them was his own in conversation with the other one….
‘There are going to be serious consequences’, ‘You sure to want to take him on?’
‘Posi – fuckin –tive. I’m sure.’
‘There will be his men coming after you.’
‘I’m not worried about Blanc and his men.’
‘I know you aren’t. I know that you are not afraid of Blanc and I also know that your anger outweighs your senses but not enough to stop your head from working. You’re a clever kid and you must have thought about something like paying his men off to join your side since there are too many to kill off. I know you’ll take care of that, I’m not worried about that.’
‘Then what are you worried about? What’re you trying to tell me?’
‘See I wasn’t talking about Blanc. He isn’t the main man in his side of the business, he is just a bum, a sort of representative if you like to hear it in refined terms. There are bigger fish in the sea you’re going fishing for a prawn in.’
‘Who would the bigger fish be, do you know?’
‘Not in person, in fact no one knows for sure who leads that side of the show. Could be anyone of the men placed across the whole of the east of the continent. Any one of those you’ve already done business with or the ones you will in the future from parts in Russia may well be the head himself, hiding under the guise of a right hand man.’, ‘You see, your idea of Francesco though a brilliant one is not a new conjured trick by you. It has been used for ages by one and many and the fact that you used it only proves that you’re on your way to the top of the business. But the very fact that it is so brilliant and old speaks for itself because it catches you out every time. Whether you want to be caught out or not.’
‘Yeah, but right now I don’t care. It’s Blanc facing my gun and we’ll deal with whoever faces my gun – one at a time.’
‘Yes I know that, and I am quite in favour of it myself. He’s always been a pest if you ask me. But I needed to make sure you know the deep waters you are about to ripple.’
‘That’s all right. That’ why I put my money on you….always on you old man.’
‘I know, that’s why I was making sure you get your money’s worth.’
….Marco got up now and went to the bathroom, turning on the tap of the sink. Cupping his hands together, he splashed his face with water. Feeling fresh and calm, he looked up at the mirror above. He looked at the reflection staring back at him, he observed it for some time. The face staring back at him had gone through a lot in his life, what made him smile reminiscently was the fact that he told himself at that moment.
‘Lot more to come man. Train’s already moved out and you’re on it buddy’, ‘it’s time now to see what stops we come at.’
As he came out of the bathroom, there was a determined and resolute look on his face. He got dressed and as he walked out of the room, he thought to himself,
‘We’ll see who gets on it now. Oh yeah baby I promise you that. We’ll definitely see who gets on it and trust me there WILL be people coming on it now. Just got to deal with all them fags innit?’
The Game
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2008
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February
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- Chapter 2:: Gordon, his Box and the Wait...
- Chapter 3:: Old Lores and New
- Chapter 4:: A Beginning Somewhere in the Middle
- Character: Al'skandar Phillips
- Chapter 5:: Monday Mornings
- Chapter 6:: Errands
- Chapter 7:: Strings, Unfurling
- Chapter 8:: Platform No. 12
- Chapter 9:: A World in Flames
- Chapter 10:: The World Needs a Hero....
- Chapter 11:: The Village
- Chapter 12:: Shadow Diaries
- Chapter 13:: Introductions
- Chapter 14:: Marco - The Revelation
- Chapter 15:: Of Journeys with Strangers
- Chapter 16:: Of Seashells And Solitary Souls
- Chapter 17:: The Connection from the Past Begins t...
- Chapter 18:: Heaven and Hell
- Chapter 19:: The Reason
- Chapter 20:: The Factory , the Storm and the List
- Chapter 21:: The Warning
- Chapter 22:: The Book
- Chapter 23:: The Visitor on the Couch
- Chapter 24:: Do You Sleep Well in Trains?
- Chapter 25:: Cybele
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February
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Abeo Roux
Sex: Female
Species: Human
Age: 24
Physical Description: Has blossomed into a lean, confident and supremely stylish young woman, with wavy red hair and sharp brown eyes.
Strengths/Weaknesses: Everything about Abeo is double-edged. Her strengths become her weaknesses and vice versa. There's something deeper about her, more sinister, more intense, than what is seen at first glance. Her Twin is inside her own self, and is rarely ever visible to someone who hasn't known/observed her for a long time, unless of course, the situation demands it.
Adan Garcia
Sex: Male
Species: Unknown
Age: Looks about 38. But his real age is lost, even to himself.
Physical Description: Not too tall, not too short, but capable of appearing either. Brown hair highlighted by gold because of unending hours in the sun (which is weird, because, he wears a cowboy hat). He is stocky to look at, but is actually constructed out of pure muscle. Always dressed like an outlaw: trench coat, dusty boots, weird belt etc. But he also carries a black felt bag, very ancient and dusty and looks almost empty, slung to his sides.
Has a very easygoing smile above a square thread-barely goateed chin - capable of being both charming and sinister, but mostly the former. That’s until you look into his eyes, generally in the shadows of his hat, which cannot be mistaken for anything other than evil and dangerous. Gives off strange energy waves.
Weaknesses/ Strengths: Capable of fighting both with his brawns and brains, but prefers to fight with brawn, because brain's the last resort (he thinks of it as an act of charity to his adversaries). Has high manoeuvering skills and can appear to be at particular places and disappear from it at a random instance. Oh, he is also a time traveller (and doesn’t need flashy gadgets to do it, he just flicks a button in a dark little corner of his brains). Doesn’t talk much. Mostly observes from the shadows of street corners and backrooms.
Only weakness that he himself knows about is body odour. Carries a deodorant everywhere, which he never uses. The rest he prefers to keep secret at present because, he feels, it’ll ruin his style.
Al'skandar Phillips
Sex: Male.
Species: He’s not very sure. Looks mostly human.
Age: Late teens.
Physical Description: Average height. Pale. Square jaw, aquiline nose, thin mouth. Longish hair, brown at the moment, used to have silver threading through it. One wouldn’t notice Al’skandar in a room with ten people in it, till he looks up. His eyes are silver… completely. Which explains his clothing choice of caps and hooded jackets. Shades help, but not indoors. The jeans and shirts he wears are ordinary, if rather faded. Also wears a leather wristband, which is broad enough to hide an intricate silver tattoo.
Strengths: The kid at the back of the class who seems to be sleeping but can quote his/her words back at the teacher, complete with mistakes. Well, figuratively, because Al’skandar was home-schooled. He’s easily ignored. And he can finish off people’s sentences… literally. Of course, he usually does it in the relative privacy of his mind. Wouldn’t want anyone to think him a freak or anything.
Weaknesses: Physical Strength. Well, the lack thereof. Al’skandar can throw a punch, but he’d much prefer not to. His usual MO is to run away when the other person/people think(s) about hitting him. Or just ducking, which course of action does not end well for his assailant(s). He also tends to arrogance. However, he’s a bit tensed right now about the prospect of starting college.
Ascronos Hell
Species: Apparently human
Age: Undisclosed, but at least middle-aged
Physical Description: Very tall and sinewy. Long silver hair and haggard careworn face of a sorcerer obsessed with secret studies. Large eyes with great dark pupils, described as frightening and haunting by those who meet him. Long thin nose, slightly bent and crooked. Long scar on face, running in a vertical line above and below eyes, caused by experiment gone wrong. Fingers long and artistic, capable of great strength. Star-shaped mark upon a broad forehead, and strange runic symbols of unknown origin and meaning carved upon torso. Prefers simple clothing, black cloaks and fitting garments. Sometimes hooded, face in shadows. When in armour, menacing and imposing. Iron body armour with some ornamentation, also carries a massive rune-etched sword.
Strengths: Great intellect, scientific and necromantic curiousity, patience and belief in own abilities. Determination. A fair amount of physical strength. More to be found out.
Weaknesses: Overt self-reliance, hatred for the ordinary, cruelty.
Cybele
Species: One of the Other Worldlies. Shall be talked about later.
Age: Does not really matter, does it, as long as she looks 24.
Physical Description: Black-haired, brown-eyed, she is visible in your average penthouse dreams. She possesses a vivid smile and a body to die for. Literally.
Strengths: Blood Sugar Sex Magic.
Weaknesses: Men.
Marital Status: Single (How, one may ask. Its just that no one's been able to keep up with her. Yet.)
Likes: Chocolates and Tarot Cards.
Dislikes: Bad breath.
Occupation: Currently engaged in seducing a high priest of the RHEUMATIC ORDER.
Exitium Morsque
Species: Apparently human
Age: Late 40s-early 50s.
Physical Features: About 6 feet tall and very thin. Has bluish grey eyes and long, greying hair. Slight hunchback. Slight limp in the left leg. Wears an old army greatcoat and baggy trousers. Sports a small tattoo of a snake, on the back of his right hand.
Strengths: Can move very fast in spite of limp. Very good with the kobudÅ set of weapons. Carries a walking stick with him. Very piercing stare. Persuasive. Has an extensive knowledge of technology. Has a sense of humour. Seems to be able to take higher amount of damage than normal.
Weakness: Frequently disappears. Cannot be relied upon much. Has a tendency to believe the best of people. Still believes in values like honesty and patriotism (this could also be a strength). Has a tendency to play the devil's advocate.
Gordon
Species: Apparently human
Age: Unknown
Physical Description: Dirty ragged clothes, bony limbs, dirty claw-like nails. Head is hooded most of the time so face cannot be distinguished clearly. Long dirty brown hair, bearded, piercing and disturbing gaze. Has a box all the time - a blackish brown wooden box with a heavy lid and metal knobs, and strange engravings on the surface, dirty and dented. He stays in this box at some street-corner nearby a railway station, apparently a street sleeper.
Himalaya alias Him
Species: Apparently human
Age: Apparently 10-and-a-half
Physical Description: Smallish, coffee coloured, snub-nosed, brown-eyed. Unnoticeable and nondescript for most of the time. Crooked teeth giving way to a crooked smile that is both very rare and startlingly lovely. Sleek black hair, usually pulled into a ponytail. Grubby knees, faded clothes. Prefers being shoeless. Has had a tiny nosepin since birth, muted gold. It won’t come off. No dramatic scars, to her disappointment, just scabs.
Strengths: Non-prejudiced. Is a kid. Can keep quiet when required, can blend into the background if necessary. Self-reliant to an extent, therefore resourceful. Has an imagination that leans towards depravity.
Weaknesses: Same as above. Also a little nosy. If it had been a strength it would have been called inquisitiveness, but the plain truth is that she's nosy. In a covert way, of course.
Mala Das
Species: Apparently human
Age: Around 27-29 years (she gets all flustered when asked)
Physical Description: Everbody knows a Mala Das (pronounced Daash), with different names perhaps. She is around 5’2”, neither fat nor thin, neither tall nor short, neither dark nor fair. Has medium-length black hair, usually well-oiled and braided. Oval nondescript face with a small pretty nose, calm peaceful rather large black eyes and a soft, slightly petulant mouth. All her features are rather ‘beautiful’ when considered separately, but when they come together in her face, no striking beauty is created. Her face is perhaps not plain, but neither beautiful - rather ordinary.
Strengths: Soft-spoken, reserved and shy. Has great persuasive power. Generally described with the vague “She’s nice.”
Weakness: The tendency to be inconspicuous, almost invisible. And not even remotely exciting.
Marital status: Unmarried. Reason 1. Does not want to leave old mother. 2. Never really liked somebody in that way (unless you consider Shah Rukh Khan, of course). Nevertheless, her mother is still on the lookout for respectable marriage ads.
Occupation: Receptionist at an average office (not a very well-known one perhaps, but "very respectable").
Quirks: The only thing not ordinary in her is her almost compulsive obsession with horror novels. They tend to make her laugh.
Marco Zabrinski
Species: Human
Age: 23
Physical Description: Average height, slight tan, medium-length hair, slightly bony cheeks with a stubble which he never gets rid of. Clothing differs from time to time but normally a pair of jeans and a T-Shirt with a leather jacket over it. Has a tattoo of a dagger on his left arm and it peeks out of his sleeve.
Strengths: Mental toughness unmatched
Weaknesses: His past
Occupation: Climbing the stairs of success in the drug trafficking industry
Born in: Masovia, Poland
Stays at: Rome
Mark Middleton
Species: Apparently human
Age: Apparently, late 30s.
Physical Features: Light built, medium height, casually dressed, does not stand out from a distance. Walks slowly, talks in a low voice, but the discerning eye will notice a casual grace to his movement of the kind imparted by restraint of a greater agility. Angular face, framed by flowing black hair streaked with a few grey strands. Prominent eyebrows, deep, calm, almost weary eyes. Nose would've been small and sharp if it didn't look like its left side had been smashed by a heavy blow. Overlooking that flaw, there is a mildly melancholy, worn-out charmingness about him. Only when he grins - which he does not do often - the person being grinned at realizes that the man looking at them is different, quite different from what they had taken him to be.
Strengths: Presence of mind. Learns/understands/reacts appropriately before others around him even realize he's working things out.
Weaknesses: Does not know who he is or why he is here. No friends, weapons or any other visible advantage. No apparent goal/ambition/purpose. Curious and easily tempted, but he's struggling to control that. Is likely to discover more of his strengths and weaknesses as he goes by.
Mer-Unta
Species: Mermaid
Age: 7 in Mer-years (21 in Human years)
Physical Description: Black wavy hair with brown highlights, waist length. Clear skin, slim figure, height 5 ft. Lower body is that of a fish, each scale a shiny bluish-green colour. Has startlingly green eyes, that seem to probe into the depths of your mind when she's looking at you. Wears a long chain of sea-shells strung together. Speaks a rare dialect of the Mer-people, called Mer-drinab, though she can also speak English. Walks on her hands when she is on the ground.
Weaknesses: Loses strength if she is not wearing her sea-shell necklace.
Strengths: Has fantastic strength in the lower 'fish' part of her body, one lash from it can make a dent in cement. Strong swimmer, can cover great distances in a few minutes or so. Mer-Unta can also change the colour of her eyes according to her mood.
Moses Putatunda
Species: Human
Age: 22
Physical description: Average Joe looks. But looks kind of cute with ruffled hair. Piercing eyes. Worn out mountain shoes, likes to wear t-shirts with logos of his favorite bands. Unwashed jeans, worn out by heavy use, not by the brand manufacturer. The usual unkempt backpacker look.
Strengths: Above average intelligence, excellent intuition and perceptiveness, superior observation skills (sometimes over-rated) , very persuasive when needed. Can also cause bizarre and disastrous random events and affect random people randomly anywhere in the world with electromagnetic brain impulses. But he doesn't know it.
Weaknesses: Indecisive, sometimes impatient and given to fits of rage, weighs 48 kgs. Others will be unveiled progressively.
Psyche Wilson
Species: Homo sapien
Age: 23
Physical Description: Tall. Dark, slightly curly hair (below shoulder length). Coffee-coloured eyes. Broad frame. Slight tan. Wears black-rimmed, rectangular spectacles. Wears a mood ring on the middle finger of the left hand. Smart sense of dressing, although not too adventurous. Not unattractive.
Strengths: Sharp, courageous, calm, stoical, generous, loves children. More to be disclosed as story progresses.
Weaknesses: Short attention span, proud, unforgiving, slightly conservative or old-fashioned (however you may want to put it). More to be revealed. Also, has vertigo.
Marital Status: Unmarried
Likes: All the books her grandmother left her, children, dogs, pink carnations, alcohol.
Dislikes: Her father, her current job, cats.
Occupation: Does free-lance work for local newsapapers. Looking for another job.
Born in (place): Athens, Greece.
Stays at: Istanbul, Turkey.
Rufeus
Species: Vampire
Age: 17-and-a-half
Physical Description: Medium height, thin, slightly hunched. Pale skinned, an almost triangular face, deep black hair. Bloodshot, intense eyes; a short, crooked nose, bat-like ears, a tapering chin and sharp, pointed teeth. Tiny, thin scratch below the right eye which always seems fresh. Long, slender fingers, like a pianist, with fingernails which look weathered, slightly yellowed. Speaks slowly and with an undertone of hostility, due to his embittered views about his existence, identity and spite for things in general. Dressed in a shabby, medieval black overcoat with specks of dry blood in the middle, a black, torn trouser.
Strengths: Extremely determined, has strong views about things,v alues his judgment which is more humanely relevant than riddled with savage desires. Possesses considerable strength and can turn extremely ruthless when he faces his enemies, especially if he's emotionally provoked. Has exceptionally controlled thirst for blood, which arises from immeasurable spite for his family and his identity.
Weaknesses: His disregard, contempt for his identity, his unwillingness to appreciate himself for who he really is which results in a rising discontent, an emotional imbalance within.
Saibalini Sen
Species: Human
Age: 64
Physical Description: Tall and angular, white hair pulled back in a bun, usually clad in crisp white sarees and shawls to match.
Strengths: Agility and a voice that commands attention.
Weakness: High blood pressure.
Zephyrus alias Henry White
Species: Half-god
Age: Ageless
Physical Description: Long shiny raven black hair. A slim built. He is characterised by his flowing black robe and scars on his forearms. Looks like he is in his 20's (a major advantage when it comes to flirting). Mismatched blue and hazel eyes.
Strengths: Ageless good looks. Ruthless and cold. His heart has stopped beating long ago. Does not possess physical strengths as such but his "almost-immortality" protects him from being killed in the hands of any human.
Weaknesses: Overconfidence.
Quicknotice 3
This wave, will drop authors who had posted characters but never wrote a chapter. The characters remain, and will be free to be picked up by any active author who wants them.
(The third wave of dropping will be for authors who have written one chapter and haven't returned to carry ahead the story. Therefore, be warned and prepared.)
[Late September, 2008]
Quicknotice 2
I haven't deleted any of your character posts either. They've been sent to the drafts and can be retrieved, if you want to.
And there are more than five characters now, so we jump into the story. Newcomers, however, please feel free to introduce yours characters. Make them a post (see the first post for further instructions). They'll arrive at the sidebar (and the drafts) in due course of time.
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