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Quicknotice 4

Last call before the removal of unused characters. Anyone wants to take up any of the following?

- Abeo Roux
- Exitium Morsque
- Rufeus

Last call before the removal of long-unwritten characters. Anyone wants to take up any of the following?

- Gordon
- Mala Das
- Psyche Wilson
(Adan Garcia, Ascronos Hell and Mer-Unta are already in use by active writers.)


Deadline for this would be one month from now. Write a chapter to claim your character.


[December 15, 2008]

Thursday, February 14, 2008

Chapter 14:: Marco - The Revelation

The cigarette was almost burnt up, just a last few bits of it were still left to be puffed away into ash. He looked around and made sure he was alone before going back to the cigarette. His senses needed to be alert, he needed to reassure himself from time to time that it was just him and him alone on that rooftop that night, as he stood there leaning on the edge waiting in the dark.

He glanced at his watch; the person he was supposed to be meeting was late by quite a while. He reached below and felt the briefcase which lay against his legs, he needed to get a feel of it every now and then to make sure it was still there. The night wore on and he had to light another cigarette to keep him going on. He noticed the sky was unusually dark and without stars tonight, a slight breeze was blowing across which made him feel a slight chill. He was slowly beginning to lose patience, he would have gone away by now had the stakes not been so high. All of a sudden, the eerie silence was broken by the sound of footsteps up the stairs and walking out onto the roof. The man who approached him now was an absolute legend in his own right; he had done absolutely everything a man in the business could do. He had a slightly unnerving stare fixed upon the person he had come up to meet and he took a long time to break away from the stare – it was quite a while before he lit up a cigarette of his own and addressed the person he had come to meet.

‘I didn’t know Francesco had begun to send babies still in their diapers to see through transactions like these. What’s your name anyway kid?’

‘Zabrinski, Marco Zabrinski.’

‘Huh? What? Zarbrins….!!!’

‘Zabrinski, Marco.. Zabrinski’, repeated Marco slowly.

‘Don’t you talk back to me you punk! You kids these days, think you know everything and you’re tough enough just cuz you can carry an automatic now.’

‘I don’t have an automatic, Mr. Blanc.’

‘So you know my name huh! Drop the attitude kid, don’t fuckin white collar me.’

‘Francesco makes sure we know the names of everyone we do transactions with, Mr. Blanc.’

‘Yeah yeah right, that’s enough, like I wanted to know what goes on in your little nursery rhyme classes with Francesco. You got the bag kid?’

Marco nodded lightly and answered, ‘Sure do Mr. Blanco.’

‘Open it and show me, I don’t trust that pimp of a boss of yours anymore. Sneaky bastard he always was, to never show his face himself and sending along crummy pissers in your pants like you to deal with someone like me.’

Marco had a wry smile on his face, he was observing Blanc as he spoke and for some reason he felt he was looking at himself twenty years from now.
‘What are you waiting for punk? Show me the damn thing and let’s get this thing over with.’

‘Was wondering Mr. Blanc, you haven’t brought any security with you, why is that?’

‘What do you mean not brought any security? Now I need security huh? From whom, you or your coward boss that fucker Francesco.’

‘Yeah, but say what if something goes wrong or something? Won’t you need any one to protect you or something?’

‘I can protect myself very well from mugs of your kind if that’s where you’re getting at. Now cut the crap and open the bag and show me.’

‘So you telling me, that right now if you ARE attacked, no one is going to be here in a flash with a scary gun and try to save you? That is really brave of you isn’t it Mr. Blanc? Especially at this age.’

The last sentence was uttered with a laugh and it carried on even after Marco had finished speaking. It was quite an echoing laugh; one which could easily have raised a few hairs on the backs of men less braver than Blanc.

‘Hey, what the fuck you laughing at? Francesco is nuts, sending along a lunatic like you.’

‘You’ve never really seen Francesco have you Mr. Blanc?’

‘Didn’t I just say that? He’s a fuckin coward and only ever had the pair of nuts to talk to me over the phone, never shows his face to no one I’ve heard. Now if you want the shipment, then open the fuckin bag right NOW!!!’

‘Oooh, what have we here? A raised voice, I like raised voices, women like it even more. You see they like to hear some authority in the voice of the man who is doing them. They sort of like to know that what’s penetrating them, is engineered by a man who knows what he’s doing. It’s a scientifically proven fact, men shout more when they know what they’re doing.’

‘Hey, listen here POLACK! I don’t have the time to hear about birds getting fucked here and how big they like the cocks to be that fucks them. I want my money and I want it now.’

Marco looked at him a moment and said, ‘Now you can open it yourself can’t you Mr. Blanc?’, and he flung the briefcase at Blanc who caught it and was about to open it when he had to stop all of a sudden.

‘What are you doing?’, yelled out Blanc as Marco took advantage of Blanc’s both hands being engaged in holding onto the case, by whipping out his 9mm and pointing it right between the eyes of Blanco.

Blanco barely managed to say a word properly, ‘I..thought you..thought you said you didn’t have any automatic or something.’

‘Really? I find it hard to believe that a man of your experience thinks it advisable to do these transactions without any guns in our pockets as backup. Either you are really really stupid or it’s the age that’s getting you Blanc. Now, you do know I’ll shoot you if you try to move your hands don’t you?’

‘What the fuck’re you doing?’

‘What is necessary. Remember the last shipment you sent along in return for the fat cash I paid you?’

‘Yeah I remember.’

‘Course you do, yes, oh yes you do don’t you?’, said Marco with a menacing look in his eyes which had begun to go bloodshot by now.

‘Now’, continued Marco, ‘What the fuck was meant to be in that shipment and what was in it? You think you can fuck with me asshole and get away with it do you? A shipment full of cocaine is what I pay you for and what d’yeh give me? What d’yeh give me huh? Powder???? I could not believe how cheap that was, I mean a guy like you! You’re supposed to be a legend, if this is what they call a legend then I’m gonna be a fucking legend after tonight already, and yet so young huh!’

‘Hey hey hey!! Calm down alright, there must have been a mistake. I’ve been sending you shipments for years now, why would I not send you the proper shit?’

‘Hmm, I dunno maybe cuz you struck up a new deal with that mother fucker over on the other side of the ocean to give you more money for less of the shit, cuz he’s so fucking desperate to get a sniff of it that he’ll even give in to the demands of a jackass like you.’

‘Hold on, hold it, let me explain all right. Tell Francesco it ain’t never gonna happen again. Here, take back the money.’

Blanc tried to pass the briefcase back to Marco but Marco wasn’t buying any of it.

‘You move your hands anywhere but keep it pasted to that case and I blow your fucking brains off, you get me!!!!’

‘Okay, okay. Relax, please for fuck’s sake just relax. Listen, there ain’t no need to pay me for this shipment okay, and it never happens again. I’ll make sure of it.’

‘See, if I was a nut to believe the word of a crook like you, then I would have to be a real cunt to do that. You trying to prove I’m a cunt? Huh? What? You trying to prove that? Cuz tell you what asshole, that is the last thing you will ever have done in your life,’

In an instant there was the near silent sound of bullets shooting out of the 9mm, silenced by the long silencer fitted to the nozzle. This was then followed by the thud of the briefcase dropping to the ground, followed by a much louder thud.

Blanc lay there twitching, he barely managed to say anything more, just a few more syllables, ‘I – never – trusted – Francesco.’

Then he fell silent as the light in his eyes died out and his body stopped twitching. Marco walked over to the body and picked up the briefcase, he then opened it to reveal an empty case with nothing but the jacket of his 9mm gun in it.

‘You were right Blanc, you should have never trusted me. You should never have trusted a man who likes to send along crummy kids such as himself to polish off cheats like you’, ‘You were regarded as a legend, but at heart you were still the cheat who had started out by robbing old ladies on the streets of Napoli. And you got one massive thing wrong Blanc, you never fuck with me, cuz when you do, I fuck YOU up. And as you can see, I fuck you up real bad.’

3 comments:

Bone said...

haha, did i tell you? i love this, okay.

"you should never have trusted a man who likes to send along crummy kids such as himself to polish off cheats like you."

love!!

Bone said...

and i'm sure the polishman is a brilliant pun, much better than the terrible jokes you post on the other blog. here's the joebear i know xD

AbhijanB said...

well the Joe B R, special emphasis on [B R] as opposed to [bear], :P, anyway as i was saying, the joe is always the same, lets not go back to your lack of wide range of humour comprehendo, and let me thank you for liking this bloke, for as you have seen , some have left their brains at home and taken Marco to be a despo.

Abeo Roux

Name: Abeo Roux
Sex
: Female
Species: Human
Age: 24
Physical Description: Has blossomed into a lean, confident and supremely stylish young woman, with wavy red hair and sharp brown eyes.
Strengths/Weaknesses: Everything about Abeo is double-edged. Her strengths become her weaknesses and vice versa. There's something deeper about her, more sinister, more intense, than what is seen at first glance. Her Twin is inside her own self, and is rarely ever visible to someone who hasn't known/observed her for a long time, unless of course, the situation demands it.

Adan Garcia

Sex: Male
Species: Unknown
Age: Looks about 38. But his real age is lost, even to himself.
Physical Description: Not too tall, not too short, but capable of appearing either. Brown hair highlighted by gold because of unending hours in the sun (which is weird, because, he wears a cowboy hat). He is stocky to look at, but is actually constructed out of pure muscle. Always dressed like an outlaw: trench coat, dusty boots, weird belt etc. But he also carries a black felt bag, very ancient and dusty and looks almost empty, slung to his sides.
Has a very easygoing smile above a square thread-barely goateed chin - capable of being both charming and sinister, but mostly the former. That’s until you look into his eyes, generally in the shadows of his hat, which cannot be mistaken for anything other than evil and dangerous. Gives off strange energy waves.
Weaknesses/ Strengths: Capable of fighting both with his brawns and brains, but prefers to fight with brawn, because brain's the last resort (he thinks of it as an act of charity to his adversaries). Has high manoeuvering skills and can appear to be at particular places and disappear from it at a random instance. Oh, he is also a time traveller (and doesn’t need flashy gadgets to do it, he just flicks a button in a dark little corner of his brains). Doesn’t talk much. Mostly observes from the shadows of street corners and backrooms.
Only weakness that he himself knows about is body odour. Carries a deodorant everywhere, which he never uses. The rest he prefers to keep secret at present because, he feels, it’ll ruin his style.

Al'skandar Phillips

Name: Al’skandar Phillips.
Sex: Male.
Species: He’s not very sure. Looks mostly human.
Age: Late teens.
Physical Description: Average height. Pale. Square jaw, aquiline nose, thin mouth. Longish hair, brown at the moment, used to have silver threading through it. One wouldn’t notice Al’skandar in a room with ten people in it, till he looks up. His eyes are silver… completely. Which explains his clothing choice of caps and hooded jackets. Shades help, but not indoors. The jeans and shirts he wears are ordinary, if rather faded. Also wears a leather wristband, which is broad enough to hide an intricate silver tattoo.
Strengths: The kid at the back of the class who seems to be sleeping but can quote his/her words back at the teacher, complete with mistakes. Well, figuratively, because Al’skandar was home-schooled. He’s easily ignored. And he can finish off people’s sentences… literally. Of course, he usually does it in the relative privacy of his mind. Wouldn’t want anyone to think him a freak or anything.
Weaknesses: Physical Strength. Well, the lack thereof. Al’skandar can throw a punch, but he’d much prefer not to. His usual MO is to run away when the other person/people think(s) about hitting him. Or just ducking, which course of action does not end well for his assailant(s). He also tends to arrogance. However, he’s a bit tensed right now about the prospect of starting college.

Ascronos Hell

Sex: Male
Species: Apparently human
Age: Undisclosed, but at least middle-aged
Physical Description: Very tall and sinewy. Long silver hair and haggard careworn face of a sorcerer obsessed with secret studies. Large eyes with great dark pupils, described as frightening and haunting by those who meet him. Long thin nose, slightly bent and crooked. Long scar on face, running in a vertical line above and below eyes, caused by experiment gone wrong. Fingers long and artistic, capable of great strength. Star-shaped mark upon a broad forehead, and strange runic symbols of unknown origin and meaning carved upon torso. Prefers simple clothing, black cloaks and fitting garments. Sometimes hooded, face in shadows. When in armour, menacing and imposing. Iron body armour with some ornamentation, also carries a massive rune-etched sword.
Strengths: Great intellect, scientific and necromantic curiousity, patience and belief in own abilities. Determination. A fair amount of physical strength. More to be found out.
Weaknesses: Overt self-reliance, hatred for the ordinary, cruelty.

Cybele

Sex: Female.
Species: One of the Other Worldlies. Shall be talked about later.
Age: Does not really matter, does it, as long as she looks 24.
Physical Description: Black-haired, brown-eyed, she is visible in your average penthouse dreams. She possesses a vivid smile and a body to die for. Literally.
Strengths: Blood Sugar Sex Magic.
Weaknesses: Men.
Marital Status: Single (How, one may ask. Its just that no one's been able to keep up with her. Yet.)
Likes: Chocolates and Tarot Cards.
Dislikes: Bad breath.
Occupation: Currently engaged in seducing a high priest of the RHEUMATIC ORDER.

Exitium Morsque

Sex: Apparently male
Species: Apparently human
Age: Late 40s-early 50s.
Physical Features: About 6 feet tall and very thin. Has bluish grey eyes and long, greying hair. Slight hunchback. Slight limp in the left leg. Wears an old army greatcoat and baggy trousers. Sports a small tattoo of a snake, on the back of his right hand.
Strengths: Can move very fast in spite of limp. Very good with the kobudō set of weapons. Carries a walking stick with him. Very piercing stare. Persuasive. Has an extensive knowledge of technology. Has a sense of humour. Seems to be able to take higher amount of damage than normal.
Weakness: Frequently disappears. Cannot be relied upon much. Has a tendency to believe the best of people. Still believes in values like honesty and patriotism (this could also be a strength). Has a tendency to play the devil's advocate.

Gordon

Sex: Male
Species: Apparently human
Age: Unknown
Physical Description: Dirty ragged clothes, bony limbs, dirty claw-like nails. Head is hooded most of the time so face cannot be distinguished clearly. Long dirty brown hair, bearded, piercing and disturbing gaze. Has a box all the time - a blackish brown wooden box with a heavy lid and metal knobs, and strange engravings on the surface, dirty and dented. He stays in this box at some street-corner nearby a railway station, apparently a street sleeper.

Himalaya alias Him

Sex: Female
Species: Apparently human
Age: Apparently 10-and-a-half
Physical Description: Smallish, coffee coloured, snub-nosed, brown-eyed. Unnoticeable and nondescript for most of the time. Crooked teeth giving way to a crooked smile that is both very rare and startlingly lovely. Sleek black hair, usually pulled into a ponytail. Grubby knees, faded clothes. Prefers being shoeless. Has had a tiny nosepin since birth, muted gold. It won’t come off. No dramatic scars, to her disappointment, just scabs.
Strengths: Non-prejudiced. Is a kid. Can keep quiet when required, can blend into the background if necessary. Self-reliant to an extent, therefore resourceful. Has an imagination that leans towards depravity.
Weaknesses: Same as above. Also a little nosy. If it had been a strength it would have been called inquisitiveness, but the plain truth is that she's nosy. In a covert way, of course.

Mala Das

Sex: Female
Species: Apparently human
Age: Around 27-29 years (she gets all flustered when asked)
Physical Description: Everbody knows a Mala Das (pronounced Daash), with different names perhaps. She is around 5’2”, neither fat nor thin, neither tall nor short, neither dark nor fair. Has medium-length black hair, usually well-oiled and braided. Oval nondescript face with a small pretty nose, calm peaceful rather large black eyes and a soft, slightly petulant mouth. All her features are rather ‘beautiful’ when considered separately, but when they come together in her face, no striking beauty is created. Her face is perhaps not plain, but neither beautiful - rather ordinary.
Strengths: Soft-spoken, reserved and shy. Has great persuasive power. Generally described with the vague “She’s nice.”
Weakness: The tendency to be inconspicuous, almost invisible. And not even remotely exciting.
Marital status: Unmarried. Reason 1. Does not want to leave old mother. 2. Never really liked somebody in that way (unless you consider Shah Rukh Khan, of course). Nevertheless, her mother is still on the lookout for respectable marriage ads.
Occupation: Receptionist at an average office (not a very well-known one perhaps, but "very respectable").
Quirks: The only thing not ordinary in her is her almost compulsive obsession with horror novels. They tend to make her laugh.

Marco Zabrinski

Sex: Male
Species: Human
Age: 23
Physical Description: Average height, slight tan, medium-length hair, slightly bony cheeks with a stubble which he never gets rid of. Clothing differs from time to time but normally a pair of jeans and a T-Shirt with a leather jacket over it. Has a tattoo of a dagger on his left arm and it peeks out of his sleeve.
Strengths: Mental toughness unmatched
Weaknesses: His past
Occupation: Climbing the stairs of success in the drug trafficking industry
Born in: Masovia, Poland
Stays at: Rome

Mark Middleton

Sex: Male
Species: Apparently human
Age: Apparently, late 30s.
Physical Features: Light built, medium height, casually dressed, does not stand out from a distance. Walks slowly, talks in a low voice, but the discerning eye will notice a casual grace to his movement of the kind imparted by restraint of a greater agility. Angular face, framed by flowing black hair streaked with a few grey strands. Prominent eyebrows, deep, calm, almost weary eyes. Nose would've been small and sharp if it didn't look like its left side had been smashed by a heavy blow. Overlooking that flaw, there is a mildly melancholy, worn-out charmingness about him. Only when he grins - which he does not do often - the person being grinned at realizes that the man looking at them is different, quite different from what they had taken him to be.
Strengths: Presence of mind. Learns/understands/reacts appropriately before others around him even realize he's working things out.
Weaknesses: Does not know who he is or why he is here. No friends, weapons or any other visible advantage. No apparent goal/ambition/purpose. Curious and easily tempted, but he's struggling to control that. Is likely to discover more of his strengths and weaknesses as he goes by.

Mer-Unta

Sex: Female
Species: Mermaid
Age: 7 in Mer-years (21 in Human years)
Physical Description: Black wavy hair with brown highlights, waist length. Clear skin, slim figure, height 5 ft. Lower body is that of a fish, each scale a shiny bluish-green colour. Has startlingly green eyes, that seem to probe into the depths of your mind when she's looking at you. Wears a long chain of sea-shells strung together. Speaks a rare dialect of the Mer-people, called Mer-drinab, though she can also speak English. Walks on her hands when she is on the ground.
Weaknesses: Loses strength if she is not wearing her sea-shell necklace.
Strengths: Has fantastic strength in the lower 'fish' part of her body, one lash from it can make a dent in cement. Strong swimmer, can cover great distances in a few minutes or so. Mer-Unta can also change the colour of her eyes according to her mood.

Moses Putatunda

Sex: Male
Species: Human
Age: 22
Physical description: Average Joe looks. But looks kind of cute with ruffled hair. Piercing eyes. Worn out mountain shoes, likes to wear t-shirts with logos of his favorite bands. Unwashed jeans, worn out by heavy use, not by the brand manufacturer. The usual unkempt backpacker look.
Strengths: Above average intelligence, excellent intuition and perceptiveness, superior observation skills (sometimes over-rated) , very persuasive when needed. Can also cause bizarre and disastrous random events and affect random people randomly anywhere in the world with electromagnetic brain impulses. But he doesn't know it.
Weaknesses: Indecisive, sometimes impatient and given to fits of rage, weighs 48 kgs. Others will be unveiled progressively.

Psyche Wilson

Sex: Female
Species: Homo sapien
Age: 23
Physical Description: Tall. Dark, slightly curly hair (below shoulder length). Coffee-coloured eyes. Broad frame. Slight tan. Wears black-rimmed, rectangular spectacles. Wears a mood ring on the middle finger of the left hand. Smart sense of dressing, although not too adventurous. Not unattractive.
Strengths: Sharp, courageous, calm, stoical, generous, loves children. More to be disclosed as story progresses.
Weaknesses: Short attention span, proud, unforgiving, slightly conservative or old-fashioned (however you may want to put it). More to be revealed. Also, has vertigo.
Marital Status: Unmarried
Likes: All the books her grandmother left her, children, dogs, pink carnations, alcohol.
Dislikes: Her father, her current job, cats.
Occupation: Does free-lance work for local newsapapers. Looking for another job.
Born in (place): Athens, Greece.
Stays at: Istanbul, Turkey.

Rufeus

Sex: Male
Species: Vampire
Age: 17-and-a-half
Physical Description: Medium height, thin, slightly hunched. Pale skinned, an almost triangular face, deep black hair. Bloodshot, intense eyes; a short, crooked nose, bat-like ears, a tapering chin and sharp, pointed teeth. Tiny, thin scratch below the right eye which always seems fresh. Long, slender fingers, like a pianist, with fingernails which look weathered, slightly yellowed. Speaks slowly and with an undertone of hostility, due to his embittered views about his existence, identity and spite for things in general. Dressed in a shabby, medieval black overcoat with specks of dry blood in the middle, a black, torn trouser.
Strengths: Extremely determined, has strong views about things,v alues his judgment which is more humanely relevant than riddled with savage desires. Possesses considerable strength and can turn extremely ruthless when he faces his enemies, especially if he's emotionally provoked. Has exceptionally controlled thirst for blood, which arises from immeasurable spite for his family and his identity.
Weaknesses: His disregard, contempt for his identity, his unwillingness to appreciate himself for who he really is which results in a rising discontent, an emotional imbalance within.

Saibalini Sen

Sex: Female
Species: Human
Age: 64
Physical Description: Tall and angular, white hair pulled back in a bun, usually clad in crisp white sarees and shawls to match.
Strengths: Agility and a voice that commands attention.
Weakness: High blood pressure.

Zephyrus alias Henry White

Sex: Male
Species: Half-god
Age: Ageless
Physical Description: Long shiny raven black hair. A slim built. He is characterised by his flowing black robe and scars on his forearms. Looks like he is in his 20's (a major advantage when it comes to flirting). Mismatched blue and hazel eyes.
Strengths: Ageless good looks. Ruthless and cold. His heart has stopped beating long ago. Does not possess physical strengths as such but his "almost-immortality" protects him from being killed in the hands of any human.
Weaknesses: Overconfidence.

Quicknotice 3

It's already been way longer than the deadline, so here's the second wave of dropping authors. (The first wave included authors who had registered but never posted.)

This wave, will drop authors who had posted characters but never wrote a chapter. The characters remain, and will be free to be picked up by any active author who wants them.

(The third wave of dropping will be for authors who have written one chapter and haven't returned to carry ahead the story. Therefore, be warned and prepared.)




[Late September, 2008]



Quicknotice 2

The characters gone pouf from the posts, yes. And no, nothing's been deleted. All the details have been sent to the sidebar, where they will stay for now on... since as the story progresses our characters' reactions to each other should not, ideally, be designed by our personal equations in life. All we need to know is who is who.

I haven't deleted any of your character posts either. They've been sent to the drafts and can be retrieved, if you want to.

And there are more than five characters now, so we jump into the story. Newcomers, however, please feel free to introduce yours characters. Make them a post (see the first post for further instructions). They'll arrive at the sidebar (and the drafts) in due course of time.