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Quicknotice 4

Last call before the removal of unused characters. Anyone wants to take up any of the following?

- Abeo Roux
- Exitium Morsque
- Rufeus

Last call before the removal of long-unwritten characters. Anyone wants to take up any of the following?

- Gordon
- Mala Das
- Psyche Wilson
(Adan Garcia, Ascronos Hell and Mer-Unta are already in use by active writers.)


Deadline for this would be one month from now. Write a chapter to claim your character.


[December 15, 2008]

Wednesday, February 6, 2008

Chapter 7:: Strings, Unfurling

He landed into the platform, breathing heavily from the exertion of taking three steps on the staircase in each stride, just in time to see the end of the train disappear into the tunnel. Trying to stop the train wasn't worth it, he reasoned, especially since the next one was due in ten minutes, and the effort would have made him feel unpleasantly drained out. He wasn't in a rush to go anywhere anyway.

Settling down instead in one of the wrought-iron seats at the emptied-out underground platform, Mark Middleton zipped open a pouch in his backpack and proceeded to take out the harmonica he had purchased minutes ago from an antique shop up on the road. It was a beautiful instrument, with the cover plate carved in intricate details. Gazing admiringly for some time, Mark brought the harmonica to his lips and softly breathed a note. Moments later, as his surroundings dissolved in music, he let his eyelids close and his mind wander down the spiralling flow.

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A week had passed since he left the hospital, and he had been lodging at one of the many nondescript hotels in the city. He went out everyday, roaming aimlessly through the city, getting himself accustomed to its life and ways, and hoping – in a vague sort of way – to come across something or someone that might stir some memory of his past. Nothing did. The only striking incident had taken place on the very first day, minutes after he had walked out of the public restroom, but he couldn't yet decide if it was of any significance in the larger scheme of things. As he was making his way down the footpath, taking in the novelty of the sights and sounds around him, a shady street dweller had suddenly leapt at him, almost out of nowhere.

"Back into business, eh sonny?" the haggard man had grinned at him, gripping Mark's shoulders tightly as he tried to evade the assault, surprised and more than a little irritated.

The man was skinny and clothed in rags and looked, Mark felt, somewhat older than himself. His hair and beard were matted with dirt, and made his face almost indistinguishable. As he spoke he looked Mark directly in the eye, and even from under the hood that shadowed the upper part of his face Mark could see a pair of minuscule red stars twinkling at him, which he thought were disturbingly menacing.

"A completely clean slate I see," the madman nodded, approvingly, inspecting him. "Good, good, good. We all could do with a bit of spring cleaning once in a while, eh? Ha ha ha!" Then an expression of mock concern came over his features, "And lookit how they've ruined your pretty face too, what a thoughtless thing to do! I doubt even I could do something to get that nose back into shape!"

"Look, you…" Mark caught the long, filthy finger of the man before it could touch his face and pushed it away from himself, anger welling up inside him. That grin was starting to creep him out.

"Never mind!" the man swatted his words with a wave of his bony hand. "Since you are still my charge, so as to say," here he winked conspirationally at Mark, and pulling his repulsive face close to his ear, dropped his voice to a whisper, "let me give you a few words of wisdom, man-to-man, haha!"

"I don't…" started Mark, but the man ignored him and continued. "Number one, never let your little head worry about money, your pockets will always have enough for what you need. Although discretion would be the key here, right?" Again that grin, again that twinkle in the eye, and a little encouraging pat on the back of his shoulder.

"Number two, and this is very important," the man raved on, "never play such games with them as might permanently alter their fates. You remember what Big Uncle has to say about the matter, I hope?" One more time the mocking little laughter that made Mark's skin crawl with disgust.

"Language will never deter you happens to be number three, but you must have figured that out already, clever little boy as you are. And don't take to fortune-telling, though I doubt you'll be able to do that any time soon," the man laughed away happily as Mark finally managed to free himself from his grasp and backed away a foot, looking around for help. A few men and women – mostly local shopkeepers and passers-by – had stopped to watch the fun, and as Mark mumbled accusatively at them, some people managed to grab the madman and started dragging him away.

"Oh and I was almost forgetting, where are my manners!" the madman was still looking back at Mark and grinning as four people tried to steer him away towards another part of the pavement. "If you manage to make some time out of your soon-to-be busy schedule, do pay some visits to our local counterparts and convey my humble greetings to them, haha! Solidarity is the way to go, eh, sonny boy?"

And then he was gone. Unsettled sufficiently by the encounter, Mark struggled to straighten himself up as comments like "Don't worry brother, just a madman!", "God knows what rubbish he'd been babbling… How dare these people come up to gentlemen these days!" floated around from a bunch of people still vaguely lingering around the spot. Someone brought Mark a plastic mug of water to clean up the filth on his clothes. Someone suggested an earthen cup of tea at a nearby stall would soothe his nerves and Mark sat on a roadside bench and drank the sweet concoction and paid up in small change, thanking the people, and went his way.

Mark Middleton had been completely wary of madmen in the street since that day, though no further attack had happened. One madman controlling the traffic at a busy road junction had merely waved a battered slipper at him one evening. But even that had made him wince and quickly leave the spot. No more madmen shall he have.

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He finished the tune and opened his eyes and the world swam back into focus. It had been more than ten minutes and a few more trains had passed in both directions. Slightly self-conscious, Mark put the harmonica back into its case and tried to put it into the backpack.

"Why not another one? I haven't heard someone play like that in a long time." Mark turned his head to look at the young woman sitting next to him, whose face broke into a smile, "Coming to think of it, I have never heard anyone play like that."

She looked as if she was in her late twenties – dressed in a blue-white salwar kameez, her hair pulled back into a braid, a practical-looking brown bag on her lap. She was not exceptionally beautiful, and indeed she looked as if she had taken the pains to look inconspicuous and succeeded rather well. But there was an overall comeliness to her features that one would miss if one did not look for it, and Mark Middleton always looked, so he noticed.

"Very kind of you to say that," he smiled back at her.

"It was beautiful. There were mountains and forests in it, and fields and little villages… and the north wind howling all through the night, and candles flickering at the windowsill. There was the primitive joy in the hearts of large shadowy beasts that start their hunt at nightfall… and little fears and little hopes in the hearts of shepherd children as they sleep huddled together in the huts at night. Is it like that where you come from?"

"You have a very vivid imagination, madam," replied Mark, carefully. The images found a resonance inside his head as well, but he could not point a finger to exactly what. He had put the harmonica to his mouth without thinking, and the tune had just flown out by itself. Her words had made her feel inadequate – as if he was merely a vessel for a much larger story, all worked out, of which he had not an inkling. But of course, there was no need to let this girl know all that.

"I think I have seen you before," said the girl, looking intently up at him. There was no admiration in that gaze, Mark noticed with a mild discomfort, only a sharp dispassionate inquiry. He wasn't used to young women looking at him like that. "Aren't you the man who was in the newspapers a few months back, whose memory was wiped out in a mysterious aeroplane accident?"

"You have a very good memory too it seems. Yes, I am he," he said. The smile must not waver.

The girl smiled. It was an easygoing smile, he told himself, not a threat. "Then your name must be… wait," she screwed up her eyes for a few moments, "Mark. Mark Something."

"Mark Middleton," he answered, trying to be his charming best. "And does that give me the right to ask for your name, if you wouldn't mind? It seems only fair."

"I am too uninteresting to be in the newspapers for anything," she shrugged, looking distracted already. "But since you asked, my name is Mala. Mala Das. Nice to meet you. You play music quite well."

She got up from the seat, lifted the bag to her shoulder and started walking towards the edge of the platform, into the crowd. The next train was entering the station.

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7 comments:

CheshireCat said...

"It was beautiful. There were mountains and forests in it, and fields and little villages… and the north wind howling all through the night, and candles flickering at the windowsill. There was the primitive joy in the hearts of large shadowy beasts that start their hunt at nightfall… and little fears and little hopes in the hearts of shepherd children as they sleep huddled together in the huts at night. Is it like that where you come from?"


But this Can't be Mala Das talking.
And she would Never speak to strangers...Remember shy, reserved and quiet???
LOL!
:)

Bone said...

but that's around normal people, remember? this isn't just another guy we're talking about, playing just another sort of music. even the quietest people speak up under certain conditions, and mark middleton often falls under that "certain condition". i just wrote what mark middleton saw/heard/felt. now what was going on in her head when she spoke is not something i would know, that's what you can tell better, right?

and if you come to think of it, nobody speaks like that under normal conditions. people are hardly that eloquent in real life, even less to strangers. but these are not just people. they're mark middleton and mala das. thasswhy. the encounter has happened. now you have the upperhand to do anything with it, take it anywhere.

roleplay story blog, yes? :D

Fishhater said...

ahhhhh. ok. its really good,but im kinda completely nonplussed. you'r voice has changed from the last story... but the essential you remains. very really good....though, and the first interaction too!!!!!! exciting shit!!

Doubletake, Doublethink. said...

i love the fact that he can play a harmonica beautifully without making funny noises. =]

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Anonymous said...

Pop quiz: There's a male character intricately hidden by the writer in this chapter (obviously not directly named). Can anyone tell who is he?

Rhea Silvia said...

Gordon?

Abeo Roux

Name: Abeo Roux
Sex
: Female
Species: Human
Age: 24
Physical Description: Has blossomed into a lean, confident and supremely stylish young woman, with wavy red hair and sharp brown eyes.
Strengths/Weaknesses: Everything about Abeo is double-edged. Her strengths become her weaknesses and vice versa. There's something deeper about her, more sinister, more intense, than what is seen at first glance. Her Twin is inside her own self, and is rarely ever visible to someone who hasn't known/observed her for a long time, unless of course, the situation demands it.

Adan Garcia

Sex: Male
Species: Unknown
Age: Looks about 38. But his real age is lost, even to himself.
Physical Description: Not too tall, not too short, but capable of appearing either. Brown hair highlighted by gold because of unending hours in the sun (which is weird, because, he wears a cowboy hat). He is stocky to look at, but is actually constructed out of pure muscle. Always dressed like an outlaw: trench coat, dusty boots, weird belt etc. But he also carries a black felt bag, very ancient and dusty and looks almost empty, slung to his sides.
Has a very easygoing smile above a square thread-barely goateed chin - capable of being both charming and sinister, but mostly the former. That’s until you look into his eyes, generally in the shadows of his hat, which cannot be mistaken for anything other than evil and dangerous. Gives off strange energy waves.
Weaknesses/ Strengths: Capable of fighting both with his brawns and brains, but prefers to fight with brawn, because brain's the last resort (he thinks of it as an act of charity to his adversaries). Has high manoeuvering skills and can appear to be at particular places and disappear from it at a random instance. Oh, he is also a time traveller (and doesn’t need flashy gadgets to do it, he just flicks a button in a dark little corner of his brains). Doesn’t talk much. Mostly observes from the shadows of street corners and backrooms.
Only weakness that he himself knows about is body odour. Carries a deodorant everywhere, which he never uses. The rest he prefers to keep secret at present because, he feels, it’ll ruin his style.

Al'skandar Phillips

Name: Al’skandar Phillips.
Sex: Male.
Species: He’s not very sure. Looks mostly human.
Age: Late teens.
Physical Description: Average height. Pale. Square jaw, aquiline nose, thin mouth. Longish hair, brown at the moment, used to have silver threading through it. One wouldn’t notice Al’skandar in a room with ten people in it, till he looks up. His eyes are silver… completely. Which explains his clothing choice of caps and hooded jackets. Shades help, but not indoors. The jeans and shirts he wears are ordinary, if rather faded. Also wears a leather wristband, which is broad enough to hide an intricate silver tattoo.
Strengths: The kid at the back of the class who seems to be sleeping but can quote his/her words back at the teacher, complete with mistakes. Well, figuratively, because Al’skandar was home-schooled. He’s easily ignored. And he can finish off people’s sentences… literally. Of course, he usually does it in the relative privacy of his mind. Wouldn’t want anyone to think him a freak or anything.
Weaknesses: Physical Strength. Well, the lack thereof. Al’skandar can throw a punch, but he’d much prefer not to. His usual MO is to run away when the other person/people think(s) about hitting him. Or just ducking, which course of action does not end well for his assailant(s). He also tends to arrogance. However, he’s a bit tensed right now about the prospect of starting college.

Ascronos Hell

Sex: Male
Species: Apparently human
Age: Undisclosed, but at least middle-aged
Physical Description: Very tall and sinewy. Long silver hair and haggard careworn face of a sorcerer obsessed with secret studies. Large eyes with great dark pupils, described as frightening and haunting by those who meet him. Long thin nose, slightly bent and crooked. Long scar on face, running in a vertical line above and below eyes, caused by experiment gone wrong. Fingers long and artistic, capable of great strength. Star-shaped mark upon a broad forehead, and strange runic symbols of unknown origin and meaning carved upon torso. Prefers simple clothing, black cloaks and fitting garments. Sometimes hooded, face in shadows. When in armour, menacing and imposing. Iron body armour with some ornamentation, also carries a massive rune-etched sword.
Strengths: Great intellect, scientific and necromantic curiousity, patience and belief in own abilities. Determination. A fair amount of physical strength. More to be found out.
Weaknesses: Overt self-reliance, hatred for the ordinary, cruelty.

Cybele

Sex: Female.
Species: One of the Other Worldlies. Shall be talked about later.
Age: Does not really matter, does it, as long as she looks 24.
Physical Description: Black-haired, brown-eyed, she is visible in your average penthouse dreams. She possesses a vivid smile and a body to die for. Literally.
Strengths: Blood Sugar Sex Magic.
Weaknesses: Men.
Marital Status: Single (How, one may ask. Its just that no one's been able to keep up with her. Yet.)
Likes: Chocolates and Tarot Cards.
Dislikes: Bad breath.
Occupation: Currently engaged in seducing a high priest of the RHEUMATIC ORDER.

Exitium Morsque

Sex: Apparently male
Species: Apparently human
Age: Late 40s-early 50s.
Physical Features: About 6 feet tall and very thin. Has bluish grey eyes and long, greying hair. Slight hunchback. Slight limp in the left leg. Wears an old army greatcoat and baggy trousers. Sports a small tattoo of a snake, on the back of his right hand.
Strengths: Can move very fast in spite of limp. Very good with the kobudō set of weapons. Carries a walking stick with him. Very piercing stare. Persuasive. Has an extensive knowledge of technology. Has a sense of humour. Seems to be able to take higher amount of damage than normal.
Weakness: Frequently disappears. Cannot be relied upon much. Has a tendency to believe the best of people. Still believes in values like honesty and patriotism (this could also be a strength). Has a tendency to play the devil's advocate.

Gordon

Sex: Male
Species: Apparently human
Age: Unknown
Physical Description: Dirty ragged clothes, bony limbs, dirty claw-like nails. Head is hooded most of the time so face cannot be distinguished clearly. Long dirty brown hair, bearded, piercing and disturbing gaze. Has a box all the time - a blackish brown wooden box with a heavy lid and metal knobs, and strange engravings on the surface, dirty and dented. He stays in this box at some street-corner nearby a railway station, apparently a street sleeper.

Himalaya alias Him

Sex: Female
Species: Apparently human
Age: Apparently 10-and-a-half
Physical Description: Smallish, coffee coloured, snub-nosed, brown-eyed. Unnoticeable and nondescript for most of the time. Crooked teeth giving way to a crooked smile that is both very rare and startlingly lovely. Sleek black hair, usually pulled into a ponytail. Grubby knees, faded clothes. Prefers being shoeless. Has had a tiny nosepin since birth, muted gold. It won’t come off. No dramatic scars, to her disappointment, just scabs.
Strengths: Non-prejudiced. Is a kid. Can keep quiet when required, can blend into the background if necessary. Self-reliant to an extent, therefore resourceful. Has an imagination that leans towards depravity.
Weaknesses: Same as above. Also a little nosy. If it had been a strength it would have been called inquisitiveness, but the plain truth is that she's nosy. In a covert way, of course.

Mala Das

Sex: Female
Species: Apparently human
Age: Around 27-29 years (she gets all flustered when asked)
Physical Description: Everbody knows a Mala Das (pronounced Daash), with different names perhaps. She is around 5’2”, neither fat nor thin, neither tall nor short, neither dark nor fair. Has medium-length black hair, usually well-oiled and braided. Oval nondescript face with a small pretty nose, calm peaceful rather large black eyes and a soft, slightly petulant mouth. All her features are rather ‘beautiful’ when considered separately, but when they come together in her face, no striking beauty is created. Her face is perhaps not plain, but neither beautiful - rather ordinary.
Strengths: Soft-spoken, reserved and shy. Has great persuasive power. Generally described with the vague “She’s nice.”
Weakness: The tendency to be inconspicuous, almost invisible. And not even remotely exciting.
Marital status: Unmarried. Reason 1. Does not want to leave old mother. 2. Never really liked somebody in that way (unless you consider Shah Rukh Khan, of course). Nevertheless, her mother is still on the lookout for respectable marriage ads.
Occupation: Receptionist at an average office (not a very well-known one perhaps, but "very respectable").
Quirks: The only thing not ordinary in her is her almost compulsive obsession with horror novels. They tend to make her laugh.

Marco Zabrinski

Sex: Male
Species: Human
Age: 23
Physical Description: Average height, slight tan, medium-length hair, slightly bony cheeks with a stubble which he never gets rid of. Clothing differs from time to time but normally a pair of jeans and a T-Shirt with a leather jacket over it. Has a tattoo of a dagger on his left arm and it peeks out of his sleeve.
Strengths: Mental toughness unmatched
Weaknesses: His past
Occupation: Climbing the stairs of success in the drug trafficking industry
Born in: Masovia, Poland
Stays at: Rome

Mark Middleton

Sex: Male
Species: Apparently human
Age: Apparently, late 30s.
Physical Features: Light built, medium height, casually dressed, does not stand out from a distance. Walks slowly, talks in a low voice, but the discerning eye will notice a casual grace to his movement of the kind imparted by restraint of a greater agility. Angular face, framed by flowing black hair streaked with a few grey strands. Prominent eyebrows, deep, calm, almost weary eyes. Nose would've been small and sharp if it didn't look like its left side had been smashed by a heavy blow. Overlooking that flaw, there is a mildly melancholy, worn-out charmingness about him. Only when he grins - which he does not do often - the person being grinned at realizes that the man looking at them is different, quite different from what they had taken him to be.
Strengths: Presence of mind. Learns/understands/reacts appropriately before others around him even realize he's working things out.
Weaknesses: Does not know who he is or why he is here. No friends, weapons or any other visible advantage. No apparent goal/ambition/purpose. Curious and easily tempted, but he's struggling to control that. Is likely to discover more of his strengths and weaknesses as he goes by.

Mer-Unta

Sex: Female
Species: Mermaid
Age: 7 in Mer-years (21 in Human years)
Physical Description: Black wavy hair with brown highlights, waist length. Clear skin, slim figure, height 5 ft. Lower body is that of a fish, each scale a shiny bluish-green colour. Has startlingly green eyes, that seem to probe into the depths of your mind when she's looking at you. Wears a long chain of sea-shells strung together. Speaks a rare dialect of the Mer-people, called Mer-drinab, though she can also speak English. Walks on her hands when she is on the ground.
Weaknesses: Loses strength if she is not wearing her sea-shell necklace.
Strengths: Has fantastic strength in the lower 'fish' part of her body, one lash from it can make a dent in cement. Strong swimmer, can cover great distances in a few minutes or so. Mer-Unta can also change the colour of her eyes according to her mood.

Moses Putatunda

Sex: Male
Species: Human
Age: 22
Physical description: Average Joe looks. But looks kind of cute with ruffled hair. Piercing eyes. Worn out mountain shoes, likes to wear t-shirts with logos of his favorite bands. Unwashed jeans, worn out by heavy use, not by the brand manufacturer. The usual unkempt backpacker look.
Strengths: Above average intelligence, excellent intuition and perceptiveness, superior observation skills (sometimes over-rated) , very persuasive when needed. Can also cause bizarre and disastrous random events and affect random people randomly anywhere in the world with electromagnetic brain impulses. But he doesn't know it.
Weaknesses: Indecisive, sometimes impatient and given to fits of rage, weighs 48 kgs. Others will be unveiled progressively.

Psyche Wilson

Sex: Female
Species: Homo sapien
Age: 23
Physical Description: Tall. Dark, slightly curly hair (below shoulder length). Coffee-coloured eyes. Broad frame. Slight tan. Wears black-rimmed, rectangular spectacles. Wears a mood ring on the middle finger of the left hand. Smart sense of dressing, although not too adventurous. Not unattractive.
Strengths: Sharp, courageous, calm, stoical, generous, loves children. More to be disclosed as story progresses.
Weaknesses: Short attention span, proud, unforgiving, slightly conservative or old-fashioned (however you may want to put it). More to be revealed. Also, has vertigo.
Marital Status: Unmarried
Likes: All the books her grandmother left her, children, dogs, pink carnations, alcohol.
Dislikes: Her father, her current job, cats.
Occupation: Does free-lance work for local newsapapers. Looking for another job.
Born in (place): Athens, Greece.
Stays at: Istanbul, Turkey.

Rufeus

Sex: Male
Species: Vampire
Age: 17-and-a-half
Physical Description: Medium height, thin, slightly hunched. Pale skinned, an almost triangular face, deep black hair. Bloodshot, intense eyes; a short, crooked nose, bat-like ears, a tapering chin and sharp, pointed teeth. Tiny, thin scratch below the right eye which always seems fresh. Long, slender fingers, like a pianist, with fingernails which look weathered, slightly yellowed. Speaks slowly and with an undertone of hostility, due to his embittered views about his existence, identity and spite for things in general. Dressed in a shabby, medieval black overcoat with specks of dry blood in the middle, a black, torn trouser.
Strengths: Extremely determined, has strong views about things,v alues his judgment which is more humanely relevant than riddled with savage desires. Possesses considerable strength and can turn extremely ruthless when he faces his enemies, especially if he's emotionally provoked. Has exceptionally controlled thirst for blood, which arises from immeasurable spite for his family and his identity.
Weaknesses: His disregard, contempt for his identity, his unwillingness to appreciate himself for who he really is which results in a rising discontent, an emotional imbalance within.

Saibalini Sen

Sex: Female
Species: Human
Age: 64
Physical Description: Tall and angular, white hair pulled back in a bun, usually clad in crisp white sarees and shawls to match.
Strengths: Agility and a voice that commands attention.
Weakness: High blood pressure.

Zephyrus alias Henry White

Sex: Male
Species: Half-god
Age: Ageless
Physical Description: Long shiny raven black hair. A slim built. He is characterised by his flowing black robe and scars on his forearms. Looks like he is in his 20's (a major advantage when it comes to flirting). Mismatched blue and hazel eyes.
Strengths: Ageless good looks. Ruthless and cold. His heart has stopped beating long ago. Does not possess physical strengths as such but his "almost-immortality" protects him from being killed in the hands of any human.
Weaknesses: Overconfidence.

Quicknotice 3

It's already been way longer than the deadline, so here's the second wave of dropping authors. (The first wave included authors who had registered but never posted.)

This wave, will drop authors who had posted characters but never wrote a chapter. The characters remain, and will be free to be picked up by any active author who wants them.

(The third wave of dropping will be for authors who have written one chapter and haven't returned to carry ahead the story. Therefore, be warned and prepared.)




[Late September, 2008]



Quicknotice 2

The characters gone pouf from the posts, yes. And no, nothing's been deleted. All the details have been sent to the sidebar, where they will stay for now on... since as the story progresses our characters' reactions to each other should not, ideally, be designed by our personal equations in life. All we need to know is who is who.

I haven't deleted any of your character posts either. They've been sent to the drafts and can be retrieved, if you want to.

And there are more than five characters now, so we jump into the story. Newcomers, however, please feel free to introduce yours characters. Make them a post (see the first post for further instructions). They'll arrive at the sidebar (and the drafts) in due course of time.