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- Abeo Roux
- Exitium Morsque
- Rufeus
Last call before the removal of long-unwritten characters. Anyone wants to take up any of the following?
- Gordon
- Mala Das
- Psyche Wilson
(Adan Garcia, Ascronos Hell and Mer-Unta are already in use by active writers.)
Deadline for this would be one month from now. Write a chapter to claim your character.
[December 15, 2008]
Thursday, February 28, 2008
Chapter 24:: Do You Sleep Well in Trains?
Having to come here irritated him a little. Offices were boring. Normally his agent would take care of this sort of a thing, but the bloody manager of the record company had demanded to conduct this particular deal personally with him. And he couldn't refuse, despite begrudgingly, because this record deal was important. It could change the direction of his musical career. He couldn't afford to mess it up. Admittedly, this man he was going to meet was the boss of one of the largest music businesses in the world. He shrugged and swore under his breath. So?
Turning the knob of the mahogany door at the far end of the corridor, he slipped himself in. Behind the desk at the centre of the room, a tall white-haired man stood with his back to the door, staring out of the glass panes at the resplendent glory of the never-sleeping metropolis as would only be visible from the 65th floor of a towering highrise. The man was dressed in an elegant dark blue suit and an antique silver watch peeked out of the sleeve on his right wrist. Music poured into the room from invisible speakers placed somewhere the visitor couldn't immediately guess, filling the ambience with the refrain of the most popular song The Statues had ever created. And I'll fish out a supernova from your hair, mad girl… When I'll be meeting you in a starfield on Pluto… Meeting you in a starfield on Pluto, he found himself humming the words, almost involuntarily.
He could have stood and revelled in the perfection of the moment forever, but his impatience was too strong. With a shrug to no one in particular, he announced, perhaps a little louder than necessary, 'Hello, I'm here! Thought I had an appointment?'
The man in front of him turned to look at him. A genial smile appeared on his handsome, middle-aged face. 'Welcome. I've been waiting for you.'
He took a shocked step back and almost tripped. 'You! You are not Roger Bennett!'
A pair of dark red stars glittered like pinpricks inside the eyes of the record company manager.
'Are you Mark Middleton?'
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You can run and run but I'll always be one step ahead of you. After all, as they say these days, who's your daddy?
His mind raced back, despite all reluctance, to the rave party one winter night in downtown Dublin, five years ago, a time before even ten people had heard the name of the band that was soon to become the phenomenon called the Statues. Reclining on a mattress in the middle of the backyard porch, a stranger who had just walked in and joined the ongoing revelry, he couldn't take his eyes off one wispy, dimple-cheeked young girl right across from him. He had been watching her all evening. She was a tiny thing, like a doll, she could've been anything between fifteen and twenty-five. Her jet black hair was cropped short, like a boy's, and fell all around her pale little face and glittering blue eyes and the two deep dimples that formed on her cheeks. Just by being in the same environment she was making him feel perfect, and oh, she just didn't seem to leave the side of her boyfriend, a nondescript grungy dimwit who had snorted a bit too much of cocaine and was going to be sick any moment. Earlier the evening the boy had a guitar (which he seemed to have lost by then), and he had been regaling a few of the girls, including his elvish beauty, with pathetic self-compositions that couldn't help make him smirk. What felt the most unacceptable was that the boy even resembled the way he looked that evening, same height, almost similar body structure, even the face was roughly similar. He could pass off as the boy's cousin. And yet the boy was enjoying the entire devotion of that stunning woman, while he was left craving and cold, while he was evidently smarter and the more deserving.
It seemed like a good idea at that time. People around them were zoned out and too busy to notice, and anyway he had just been through a very hard life, he deserved a break and some fun. So. Follow the poor jerk into the men's room. Let him finish lodging the contents of his guts into the toilet, then hit his half-stoned brain with a mild missile to knock him conveniently unconscious. Follow up by neatly muddling up the insides of his head, while also collecting the necessary information for yourself. Then the important physical transformations, not very drastic, but they had to be accurate. Exchanging clothes was the easier part. Teleporting his unfortunate victim to South Africa, though, drained away most of his physical strength, making his eyes water and his head feel like bursting at the seams. But then he could afford to stumble his way out of the men's room and into the arms of the breathtaking beauty, who would whisper his weariness away to sweet slumber. What did paradise feel like again?
Five months later, The Statues hit the top of the UK charts with their groundbreaking single, Journeys with Strangers.
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All I want for now is that for my journeys with strangers to end
Let my journeys with strangers end, end my journeys with them my friend…
'I told you not to keep coming back to my life! Why don't you let me be?' he yelled at the older man, barely able to control his anger.
'Now now my boy, the ties of blood are rather too thick to ignore aren't they?' The record company manager spoke as he walked around the table over to where Mark stood, the genial smile still hanging loosely around his lips. You would almost find it courteous, if you didn't notice too closely. 'And after all, who else do you have left in the world but me? Your poor mother couldn't have afforded to keep an eye –'
'Don't you dare take my mother's name, you bastard!' His picturesque body shook with rage, his hair flying out wild.
'Oh I apologize,' the older man retracted, his voice turning warm and smooth like liquid gold. 'I didn't know it was technically possible to take her name, you see, since I can't recollect her ever having one –'
Mark struck out wildly at the miscreant. 'Keep her out of this, okay?!'
The blow landed on the man's mouth and a thin stream of red started making its way down the corner of his lip. He looked unperturbed. Mark was horrified.
'Oh holy fuck! You're using his body!' he stammered. 'How…??'
'You do need to be reminded each time that I am a little more than what you are, don't you son?' replied the man, wiping off the blood with a nonchalant swipe of the hand. Fresher droplets began to appear immediately. 'However, the important stuff. As you I have no doubt have managed to conveniently forget, the war is upon us.'
'I clearly remember having told you before, and many times since, that I will have nothing to do with the war,' shrugged Mark. 'I'm happy, I'm having fun, I have created and nurtured this life for myself and I'm enjoying it. Why'd I want to fuck all this up?'
'You know the answer. This life that you're living is another ruse, it's not your life, it does not contain or confine you. But the war is happening in your reality. You cannot ignore it.'
'This is more of my reality than what you speak of,' Mark pointed at his chest. 'This is me. Why would I give a damn about a family and siblings and uncles whom I have never seen, forget having spent a life with? They exist to me only because you speak of them, and how many truths have you told me till date? It might all be an elaborate figment of your imagination for all I care. And that's what I'll choose to believe. You go fight your war.'
'You cannot do that.'
'What will stop me?' The eyes of Mark Middleton stared challengingly at the face of Roger Bennett.
'Fine. If so you wish,' sighed the older man, after a pregnant pause. His shoulders seemed to be sagging. Then he tried to smile, with some effort. 'How are things with life otherwise? Your old friend Mr. White does well, I believe.'
'He's cool,' replied Mark, stiffly. He wasn't used to small talk with the person in front of him.
'Indeed he is,' smiled Roger Bennett, as he walked casually up the office room. 'He seems to be having a rather relaxing session with your lady back home.'
'Shut the fuck up! Christine would never –'
'It rather seems that she would,' Bennett touched a long finger to the wide TV screen on the wall and an image came alive. It was more than just a television image. It sucked Mark in as if he was staring through a keyhole into a room – and the white walls could only belong to a room in Henry White's palatial mansion – and Mark would never mistake the two figures entwined on the bed, lost in themselves.
'I love her, you bastard! Why did you have to do this?' he screamed, feeling thoroughly wretched. The corners of his eyes twitched.
Bennett shrugged, staring innocently at the screen. 'Me?'
'This is another of those bloody tricks of yours!'
The screen went blank. Bennett turned sharply to Mark and stared at his eyes. 'Keep deluding yourself, Mark Middleton. The war has arrived. Do you think Henry White betrayed your trust with the slightest assumption that you wouldn't find out? The woman is insubstantial, this is an open declaration of the war. The was has opened as we speak, my son, weapons are being drawn, and Henry White is no friend of yours.'
'You never told me who Henry really is,' said Mark accusatively. 'You knew all along and you didn't tell me.'
'One would want to be amazed that you haven't found out in so long, clever boy as you are,' Bennett shook his head, then added sternly, 'The truth is that you never tried. Never thought it'd be necessary, did you? Well, this time you'll get to know very soon.'
Mark stared at his feet miserably for a while. Then he picked up his guitar and spat out angrily, 'That's it. I'm getting out of here. This place, this life, this war… everything!'
As he laid his hand on the doorknob, Bennett called out from behind, 'Would you not rather finish what you came here for? The record deal?'
'No, fuck you! I can get it done later!'
'Not a wise move, I'd say, especially since the paparazzi is waiting right outside the building to get hold of you the moment you step out.'
Holy fuck, the bugger's right, thought Mark. He had to have the deal signed and confirmed, and then go for a press statement. 'I want all my terms approved. I've laid them down before,' he said, reluctantly moving back.
'So you will have,' laughed Bennett, handing him a bunch of documents from the table.
Mark checked them with his mind as he read, minutely. They seemed genuine. He chose a pen from the stand on the table and signed them, one by one, and returned the papers to Bennett.
Bennett began to inspect the signed papers. As uncanny delight started to spread on his face and Mark watched, horrified, as the documents in his hands began to transform from white sheets of paper to a strange unknown bunch of parchment, written in runic symbols.
'So you have signed the unimpeachable agreement, my son,' said the man behind the desk, whose voice did not sound like Bennett's any more. 'You are born, ironically, with the constitution of a hero and you signed the agreement with revenge in your heart. That'll do.'
And then he began to laugh. It was a cackling, unearthly laughter.
--
Mark Middleton woke up with a start on the upper bunk of the train. His head throbbed with pain, he was drenched in sweat and his mind was filled with the feeling of disgust one gets after waking up from an unpleasant dream that one cannot remember. Young Moses was sleeping peacefully on the lower bunk below him, unperturbed by his turmoil. The rest of the compartment was silent except from the muffled noises of sleeping bodies. Somewhere in the cubicle someone had left a radio turned on and the devious laughter of some Hindi film villain was ringing through the slumbering compartment.
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Credits:: The lyrics for Journeys with Strangers, used in this chapter, have been written by Joe B R. My sincerest thanks to him for the brilliant contribution, thankyou, I loved it.
The Game
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February
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- Chapter 2:: Gordon, his Box and the Wait...
- Chapter 3:: Old Lores and New
- Chapter 4:: A Beginning Somewhere in the Middle
- Character: Al'skandar Phillips
- Chapter 5:: Monday Mornings
- Chapter 6:: Errands
- Chapter 7:: Strings, Unfurling
- Chapter 8:: Platform No. 12
- Chapter 9:: A World in Flames
- Chapter 10:: The World Needs a Hero....
- Chapter 11:: The Village
- Chapter 12:: Shadow Diaries
- Chapter 13:: Introductions
- Chapter 14:: Marco - The Revelation
- Chapter 15:: Of Journeys with Strangers
- Chapter 16:: Of Seashells And Solitary Souls
- Chapter 17:: The Connection from the Past Begins t...
- Chapter 18:: Heaven and Hell
- Chapter 19:: The Reason
- Chapter 20:: The Factory , the Storm and the List
- Chapter 21:: The Warning
- Chapter 22:: The Book
- Chapter 23:: The Visitor on the Couch
- Chapter 24:: Do You Sleep Well in Trains?
- Chapter 25:: Cybele
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Abeo Roux
Sex: Female
Species: Human
Age: 24
Physical Description: Has blossomed into a lean, confident and supremely stylish young woman, with wavy red hair and sharp brown eyes.
Strengths/Weaknesses: Everything about Abeo is double-edged. Her strengths become her weaknesses and vice versa. There's something deeper about her, more sinister, more intense, than what is seen at first glance. Her Twin is inside her own self, and is rarely ever visible to someone who hasn't known/observed her for a long time, unless of course, the situation demands it.
Adan Garcia
Sex: Male
Species: Unknown
Age: Looks about 38. But his real age is lost, even to himself.
Physical Description: Not too tall, not too short, but capable of appearing either. Brown hair highlighted by gold because of unending hours in the sun (which is weird, because, he wears a cowboy hat). He is stocky to look at, but is actually constructed out of pure muscle. Always dressed like an outlaw: trench coat, dusty boots, weird belt etc. But he also carries a black felt bag, very ancient and dusty and looks almost empty, slung to his sides.
Has a very easygoing smile above a square thread-barely goateed chin - capable of being both charming and sinister, but mostly the former. That’s until you look into his eyes, generally in the shadows of his hat, which cannot be mistaken for anything other than evil and dangerous. Gives off strange energy waves.
Weaknesses/ Strengths: Capable of fighting both with his brawns and brains, but prefers to fight with brawn, because brain's the last resort (he thinks of it as an act of charity to his adversaries). Has high manoeuvering skills and can appear to be at particular places and disappear from it at a random instance. Oh, he is also a time traveller (and doesn’t need flashy gadgets to do it, he just flicks a button in a dark little corner of his brains). Doesn’t talk much. Mostly observes from the shadows of street corners and backrooms.
Only weakness that he himself knows about is body odour. Carries a deodorant everywhere, which he never uses. The rest he prefers to keep secret at present because, he feels, it’ll ruin his style.
Al'skandar Phillips
Sex: Male.
Species: He’s not very sure. Looks mostly human.
Age: Late teens.
Physical Description: Average height. Pale. Square jaw, aquiline nose, thin mouth. Longish hair, brown at the moment, used to have silver threading through it. One wouldn’t notice Al’skandar in a room with ten people in it, till he looks up. His eyes are silver… completely. Which explains his clothing choice of caps and hooded jackets. Shades help, but not indoors. The jeans and shirts he wears are ordinary, if rather faded. Also wears a leather wristband, which is broad enough to hide an intricate silver tattoo.
Strengths: The kid at the back of the class who seems to be sleeping but can quote his/her words back at the teacher, complete with mistakes. Well, figuratively, because Al’skandar was home-schooled. He’s easily ignored. And he can finish off people’s sentences… literally. Of course, he usually does it in the relative privacy of his mind. Wouldn’t want anyone to think him a freak or anything.
Weaknesses: Physical Strength. Well, the lack thereof. Al’skandar can throw a punch, but he’d much prefer not to. His usual MO is to run away when the other person/people think(s) about hitting him. Or just ducking, which course of action does not end well for his assailant(s). He also tends to arrogance. However, he’s a bit tensed right now about the prospect of starting college.
Ascronos Hell
Species: Apparently human
Age: Undisclosed, but at least middle-aged
Physical Description: Very tall and sinewy. Long silver hair and haggard careworn face of a sorcerer obsessed with secret studies. Large eyes with great dark pupils, described as frightening and haunting by those who meet him. Long thin nose, slightly bent and crooked. Long scar on face, running in a vertical line above and below eyes, caused by experiment gone wrong. Fingers long and artistic, capable of great strength. Star-shaped mark upon a broad forehead, and strange runic symbols of unknown origin and meaning carved upon torso. Prefers simple clothing, black cloaks and fitting garments. Sometimes hooded, face in shadows. When in armour, menacing and imposing. Iron body armour with some ornamentation, also carries a massive rune-etched sword.
Strengths: Great intellect, scientific and necromantic curiousity, patience and belief in own abilities. Determination. A fair amount of physical strength. More to be found out.
Weaknesses: Overt self-reliance, hatred for the ordinary, cruelty.
Cybele
Species: One of the Other Worldlies. Shall be talked about later.
Age: Does not really matter, does it, as long as she looks 24.
Physical Description: Black-haired, brown-eyed, she is visible in your average penthouse dreams. She possesses a vivid smile and a body to die for. Literally.
Strengths: Blood Sugar Sex Magic.
Weaknesses: Men.
Marital Status: Single (How, one may ask. Its just that no one's been able to keep up with her. Yet.)
Likes: Chocolates and Tarot Cards.
Dislikes: Bad breath.
Occupation: Currently engaged in seducing a high priest of the RHEUMATIC ORDER.
Exitium Morsque
Species: Apparently human
Age: Late 40s-early 50s.
Physical Features: About 6 feet tall and very thin. Has bluish grey eyes and long, greying hair. Slight hunchback. Slight limp in the left leg. Wears an old army greatcoat and baggy trousers. Sports a small tattoo of a snake, on the back of his right hand.
Strengths: Can move very fast in spite of limp. Very good with the kobudÅ set of weapons. Carries a walking stick with him. Very piercing stare. Persuasive. Has an extensive knowledge of technology. Has a sense of humour. Seems to be able to take higher amount of damage than normal.
Weakness: Frequently disappears. Cannot be relied upon much. Has a tendency to believe the best of people. Still believes in values like honesty and patriotism (this could also be a strength). Has a tendency to play the devil's advocate.
Gordon
Species: Apparently human
Age: Unknown
Physical Description: Dirty ragged clothes, bony limbs, dirty claw-like nails. Head is hooded most of the time so face cannot be distinguished clearly. Long dirty brown hair, bearded, piercing and disturbing gaze. Has a box all the time - a blackish brown wooden box with a heavy lid and metal knobs, and strange engravings on the surface, dirty and dented. He stays in this box at some street-corner nearby a railway station, apparently a street sleeper.
Himalaya alias Him
Species: Apparently human
Age: Apparently 10-and-a-half
Physical Description: Smallish, coffee coloured, snub-nosed, brown-eyed. Unnoticeable and nondescript for most of the time. Crooked teeth giving way to a crooked smile that is both very rare and startlingly lovely. Sleek black hair, usually pulled into a ponytail. Grubby knees, faded clothes. Prefers being shoeless. Has had a tiny nosepin since birth, muted gold. It won’t come off. No dramatic scars, to her disappointment, just scabs.
Strengths: Non-prejudiced. Is a kid. Can keep quiet when required, can blend into the background if necessary. Self-reliant to an extent, therefore resourceful. Has an imagination that leans towards depravity.
Weaknesses: Same as above. Also a little nosy. If it had been a strength it would have been called inquisitiveness, but the plain truth is that she's nosy. In a covert way, of course.
Mala Das
Species: Apparently human
Age: Around 27-29 years (she gets all flustered when asked)
Physical Description: Everbody knows a Mala Das (pronounced Daash), with different names perhaps. She is around 5’2”, neither fat nor thin, neither tall nor short, neither dark nor fair. Has medium-length black hair, usually well-oiled and braided. Oval nondescript face with a small pretty nose, calm peaceful rather large black eyes and a soft, slightly petulant mouth. All her features are rather ‘beautiful’ when considered separately, but when they come together in her face, no striking beauty is created. Her face is perhaps not plain, but neither beautiful - rather ordinary.
Strengths: Soft-spoken, reserved and shy. Has great persuasive power. Generally described with the vague “She’s nice.”
Weakness: The tendency to be inconspicuous, almost invisible. And not even remotely exciting.
Marital status: Unmarried. Reason 1. Does not want to leave old mother. 2. Never really liked somebody in that way (unless you consider Shah Rukh Khan, of course). Nevertheless, her mother is still on the lookout for respectable marriage ads.
Occupation: Receptionist at an average office (not a very well-known one perhaps, but "very respectable").
Quirks: The only thing not ordinary in her is her almost compulsive obsession with horror novels. They tend to make her laugh.
Marco Zabrinski
Species: Human
Age: 23
Physical Description: Average height, slight tan, medium-length hair, slightly bony cheeks with a stubble which he never gets rid of. Clothing differs from time to time but normally a pair of jeans and a T-Shirt with a leather jacket over it. Has a tattoo of a dagger on his left arm and it peeks out of his sleeve.
Strengths: Mental toughness unmatched
Weaknesses: His past
Occupation: Climbing the stairs of success in the drug trafficking industry
Born in: Masovia, Poland
Stays at: Rome
Mark Middleton
Species: Apparently human
Age: Apparently, late 30s.
Physical Features: Light built, medium height, casually dressed, does not stand out from a distance. Walks slowly, talks in a low voice, but the discerning eye will notice a casual grace to his movement of the kind imparted by restraint of a greater agility. Angular face, framed by flowing black hair streaked with a few grey strands. Prominent eyebrows, deep, calm, almost weary eyes. Nose would've been small and sharp if it didn't look like its left side had been smashed by a heavy blow. Overlooking that flaw, there is a mildly melancholy, worn-out charmingness about him. Only when he grins - which he does not do often - the person being grinned at realizes that the man looking at them is different, quite different from what they had taken him to be.
Strengths: Presence of mind. Learns/understands/reacts appropriately before others around him even realize he's working things out.
Weaknesses: Does not know who he is or why he is here. No friends, weapons or any other visible advantage. No apparent goal/ambition/purpose. Curious and easily tempted, but he's struggling to control that. Is likely to discover more of his strengths and weaknesses as he goes by.
Mer-Unta
Species: Mermaid
Age: 7 in Mer-years (21 in Human years)
Physical Description: Black wavy hair with brown highlights, waist length. Clear skin, slim figure, height 5 ft. Lower body is that of a fish, each scale a shiny bluish-green colour. Has startlingly green eyes, that seem to probe into the depths of your mind when she's looking at you. Wears a long chain of sea-shells strung together. Speaks a rare dialect of the Mer-people, called Mer-drinab, though she can also speak English. Walks on her hands when she is on the ground.
Weaknesses: Loses strength if she is not wearing her sea-shell necklace.
Strengths: Has fantastic strength in the lower 'fish' part of her body, one lash from it can make a dent in cement. Strong swimmer, can cover great distances in a few minutes or so. Mer-Unta can also change the colour of her eyes according to her mood.
Moses Putatunda
Species: Human
Age: 22
Physical description: Average Joe looks. But looks kind of cute with ruffled hair. Piercing eyes. Worn out mountain shoes, likes to wear t-shirts with logos of his favorite bands. Unwashed jeans, worn out by heavy use, not by the brand manufacturer. The usual unkempt backpacker look.
Strengths: Above average intelligence, excellent intuition and perceptiveness, superior observation skills (sometimes over-rated) , very persuasive when needed. Can also cause bizarre and disastrous random events and affect random people randomly anywhere in the world with electromagnetic brain impulses. But he doesn't know it.
Weaknesses: Indecisive, sometimes impatient and given to fits of rage, weighs 48 kgs. Others will be unveiled progressively.
Psyche Wilson
Species: Homo sapien
Age: 23
Physical Description: Tall. Dark, slightly curly hair (below shoulder length). Coffee-coloured eyes. Broad frame. Slight tan. Wears black-rimmed, rectangular spectacles. Wears a mood ring on the middle finger of the left hand. Smart sense of dressing, although not too adventurous. Not unattractive.
Strengths: Sharp, courageous, calm, stoical, generous, loves children. More to be disclosed as story progresses.
Weaknesses: Short attention span, proud, unforgiving, slightly conservative or old-fashioned (however you may want to put it). More to be revealed. Also, has vertigo.
Marital Status: Unmarried
Likes: All the books her grandmother left her, children, dogs, pink carnations, alcohol.
Dislikes: Her father, her current job, cats.
Occupation: Does free-lance work for local newsapapers. Looking for another job.
Born in (place): Athens, Greece.
Stays at: Istanbul, Turkey.
Rufeus
Species: Vampire
Age: 17-and-a-half
Physical Description: Medium height, thin, slightly hunched. Pale skinned, an almost triangular face, deep black hair. Bloodshot, intense eyes; a short, crooked nose, bat-like ears, a tapering chin and sharp, pointed teeth. Tiny, thin scratch below the right eye which always seems fresh. Long, slender fingers, like a pianist, with fingernails which look weathered, slightly yellowed. Speaks slowly and with an undertone of hostility, due to his embittered views about his existence, identity and spite for things in general. Dressed in a shabby, medieval black overcoat with specks of dry blood in the middle, a black, torn trouser.
Strengths: Extremely determined, has strong views about things,v alues his judgment which is more humanely relevant than riddled with savage desires. Possesses considerable strength and can turn extremely ruthless when he faces his enemies, especially if he's emotionally provoked. Has exceptionally controlled thirst for blood, which arises from immeasurable spite for his family and his identity.
Weaknesses: His disregard, contempt for his identity, his unwillingness to appreciate himself for who he really is which results in a rising discontent, an emotional imbalance within.
Saibalini Sen
Species: Human
Age: 64
Physical Description: Tall and angular, white hair pulled back in a bun, usually clad in crisp white sarees and shawls to match.
Strengths: Agility and a voice that commands attention.
Weakness: High blood pressure.
Zephyrus alias Henry White
Species: Half-god
Age: Ageless
Physical Description: Long shiny raven black hair. A slim built. He is characterised by his flowing black robe and scars on his forearms. Looks like he is in his 20's (a major advantage when it comes to flirting). Mismatched blue and hazel eyes.
Strengths: Ageless good looks. Ruthless and cold. His heart has stopped beating long ago. Does not possess physical strengths as such but his "almost-immortality" protects him from being killed in the hands of any human.
Weaknesses: Overconfidence.
Quicknotice 3
This wave, will drop authors who had posted characters but never wrote a chapter. The characters remain, and will be free to be picked up by any active author who wants them.
(The third wave of dropping will be for authors who have written one chapter and haven't returned to carry ahead the story. Therefore, be warned and prepared.)
[Late September, 2008]
Quicknotice 2
I haven't deleted any of your character posts either. They've been sent to the drafts and can be retrieved, if you want to.
And there are more than five characters now, so we jump into the story. Newcomers, however, please feel free to introduce yours characters. Make them a post (see the first post for further instructions). They'll arrive at the sidebar (and the drafts) in due course of time.
7 comments:
this is not a full chapter, which is why there's no connection between the chapter name and the content. i apologize for the shortcoming... i've been extremely busy and extremely tired of late. this chapter has stayed written down in my notebook for mor than 2 weeks and i couldn't manage to type it out. i will type out the rest of the chapter and insert here (because it must come under the same chapter name, that's important).
for now, i'd like to know what you think of the first part.
i'm still a little confused about what exactly happened, but as you said, the rest of it should clear up things a little?
i think it misses the completeness of your longer chapters... because it needs completion... because i want to know what happened next. damn it, u just whetted my appetite and punched my stomach!
yeah so i posted the rest. does it make things look any better? this chapter is a bit of a flashback (and flashback-within-flashback, as you must have noticed), only not entirely so because markmiddleton, as of now, can't really remember his past. so the answer to the chaptername question, for him, would be "no".
abeo and zephyrus are lovers
hmm interesting new turn
i liked the details of the record label office. would've been really cool if you'd added, say, one of those sassy fast talking PR ladies or maybe the bassist of a competing band (mark detests that band and its lead singer) leaving the office and he gave mark the 'finger'. mark then could be pissed about that too.why would the label sign the rival band?
(reminiscent of the Oasis vs. Blur rivalry).
ok,i'm just blabbing here.
well.
i took out abeo roux and changed the description of mark's wife, because shreya hadn't taken up the roleplay.
for now, christine middleton she is.
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